That's beautiful. Thank you for writing that.

I know it is very stupid to send a review 5 years after this was wrote, but I really liked it. I just finished to see the whole serie and I just saw...Reinhard diying under my eyes.It was really painful, like when Kircheis was lost.

Ignore the first reviewer, though I imagine you had. It is not necessay to write a story, there is even a category called poems. Baka reviewer.
Anyway, I just majorly spoiled myself. Crap. I did not think it was that bad. NO
NO
*screams at the first line on the poem* NO
But that was really good btw..though I only skimmed, but i got the jist.

Great! The poem is really well written, plus it's very sad sweet.

"I never thought (...) to go unheard" was beautiful rhime. It is a OK poem, but I guess he was too shocked to write something.

I have read several times the original book of LoGH (Chinese translation) plus thousands of fan-fiction by its fans, and I know as a fact that there is no comparison between the book and the anime. The book was an epic, a legend beyond time and space, a river that flowed with blood and tears and the light of humanity. I had believed that no one could understand all that by watching only the TV show. Until I saw this poem, I never thought that a soul can be touched the way you did.

Thanking for writing this poem. If LoGH is truely to unfold its drama in this galaxy, thousands of years form now, I wish that you would be the one to write down their timeless dreams.

Allright... Is this supposed to be a POEM? Because maybe they should have named this section, "FanPOEMS," but you know what? They named it, "FanFICTIONS!" Basically... that means you have to write a story. So if I have to rate this on a FanFiction level? From 1-10, you get a -53. See ya around! _

-Lace