 Katraeya Bandit 2005-08-05 . chapter 1 HWEEL! IT'S SO COOL! And so sad... (starts finishing up the remaining 5 boxes of tissue at home) Anyway, i really hope you can continue this story because I am one of Grobyc's fangirls. This is also one of the best CC fics based on Grobyc that I so totally love!
Please, write a sequel? (bats eyes) |
 Syroc 2004-03-01 . chapter 1Wow, this wasa good. Ver' deep.
Hope you decide to continue you this fic (Grobyc was my fav character.)
You should be proud of zis work, anyway. |
 Insert Coin(s) To Begin 2003-11-16 . chapter 1Confusion? Fear? Self-doubt? It sounds as if Grobyc is already human and the only thing keeping him from knowing is that he's programmed to believe he's a machine. What a paradox! But Terminator-worthy gripes aside, this sounds like it will be a very good story. Two questions that might also act as suggestions: 1) Do you plan to leave the inner-monologue format? 2) If so, do you plan to pursue the vague relationship between Grobyc and Luccia that was alluded to during the game? |
 Melfice 2003-11-15 . chapter 1I actually think there is one other fic on here that has Grobyc as a main character, but regardless, I really like this one. You write Grobyc very nicely, especially on his feelings. Write more soon! :) |
 bob 2003-11-14 . chapter 1 YAY! i like it! WRITE MORE! |