umm i don't see any mention of that one senator. And i love this story

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Daykim is spelt wrong though i don't know the exact correct spelling and it's Kushrenada

i think a lot of people where moved by Heero's speech. I know I was. so, can't say much about your storie, 'cuz it's not really started.

i want to congratulate you on being the author of one of the best fics ive ever read...sure there were lots of spellingt mistakes and stuff but this fic was really good. im gonna start reading the sequel to it in a while and i cant wait!...i know ill enjoy it!

Thanx for the entertainment! _

hey, i love your ideas but your technique needs some work. have you ever thought of getting a beta or an editor of some sort? i'd be willing to help you with your writing if you like. email me at the address above and i'll get back to you. i'd love to help you out

paia

Just went through a marathon of chapters...boy did I miss a lot. ; So many plot twists, but I was glad that everything worked out in the end. Great job on all of them. _ It's cute that Mariemaia and Jin are paired up...it was nice to have her draw a smiling kitty on his paper from the last chapter. Keep up the work!

Beautiful chapter, a perfect finale.

Once more sorry for the erratic nature of my reviews.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza

Excellent chapter!

Liked the little Heero/relena type moment between Jin and Mariemaia.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza

Hmm, I wonder why he forgot...

Excellent chapter.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza

Excellent chapter, quite a few unexpected twists there.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza

Excellent chapter!

(Sorry, you must get tired of me saying the same thing everytime _;)

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza

Excellent chapter once again.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza

Nice chapter.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza

Excellent chapter!

Appologies on the delay in reviewing. I was in Canada then when I got back I started sifting through the alerts but when I got to this one there were multiple chapters so I bookmarked it for later.

After that I got caught up in various things and more chapters again appeared. I will try and get through them all now. Hopefully reviewing them, all individually.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza

that was an excellent stroy! i did see a few typos but that is expected! all in all it was very well written!