 Jack 2004-06-14 . chapter 23 Hey Aerisa
Yes, I am posting so as to avoid being strangled. But then again, I'd strangle you long before you could ever strangle me. Hehe! No, seriously, beautiful ending. Looking forward to more of your stories and You're a great writer, hun!
Alrightey then
Later
See ya soon...like real soon |
 Princess Marlene 2004-06-14 . chapter 23Hey Aeris,
Great story, loved it... so what's going to happen to Kai? Is he going to come back in the Sequel? I hope he is... and I really hope that Sauri kills Tyson sooner or later. Anyways, keep on going with your stories, doesn't it feel good to finally finish a story?
Have a nice day,
From,
Princess Marlene |
 Jack 2004-06-10 . chapter 22 hey! hey! You asked me to review and here i am. Boy, you're a really good writer. With a little bit of help from an editor, you could write novels(anime) make fortunes! HEHE! Anyway, you take care of yourself, eh? BTW, we Wednesday was fun and I'll be seein' you soon. Take care
Love Jack |
 star (u know me...duh!) 2004-06-02 . chapter 18 thehehe ou the suspense...I would ask you to update...but u already have...heehehhe |
 Princess Marlene 2004-05-16 . chapter 20Hey Aeris,
I like the chapter, really funny parts in between... although the only complaint is that the Tala/Sauri part should have been longer and more detailed. Lol, scaring you yet?
Keep on writing,
From,
Sauri |
 Kitabu 2004-05-11 . chapter 17Me thinks I know who the Aerisa look alike was! |
 Kitabu 2004-05-11 . chapter 16Gah! She goes to the hospital way to often! She gets hurt, she heels she get's hurt she heals! Gah!U U |
 Kitabu 2004-05-11 . chapter 11I'm so confuzeed:S Great story though!UPDATE!
U wanted me to put this song on this:
Five hundred twenty-five thousand six hundred
Ray pics,
Five hundred twenty-five thousand fan fic
reviews.
Five hundred twenty-five thousand six hundred
Ray pics,
I wanna be in anime too.
*NOTE*: THIS IS MY SONG! NO USING IT OR COPYING
UNLESS I SAY YOU CAN! |
 Jack..*grin* 2004-05-04 . chapter 19 hey hun...i know it's been a while since i've reviewed...this is for the work u've done so far coz i'm too lazy to write for each chapter...i love ur work...u've improved so much each time you post a new chapter...very descriptive, interesting, mysterious (damn cliffhangers!!) with all kinds of surprising twists. Keep it up, kiddo. your grammar and spelling has improved dramatically...keep working on it coz ur doing a good job! |
 star 2004-05-03 . chapter 3 Ohmigod!Aerisa is soo flirty in this episode! |
 Cindy66 2004-04-15 . chapter 17kinda like it but is kai going to get a women some chapters later |
 Cindy66 2004-04-15 . chapter 16i'm comfused does aerisa love kai or ray!! I'm so confused who is with who! @_@ it like first rei and aerisa then it is aerisa and kai |
 Shaedowe 2004-04-15 . chapter 17woo! cool!continue, don't keep me in suspense |
 you know me 2004-04-11 . chapter 16 opdatemore often and ? is that me? |
 Annam 2004-04-08 . chapter 16 Cath
you are the best.
i love it.
but i donot like Ray got pulled away from the kiss but than later he got chance to kiss her again which is great. is she really liked him or what i am not actually sure abt it. any ways great story but plz undated it soon as you are such a nice frienda and always care and listen your friends.
right
great story
BUT I ACTUALLY WANT ENDING
GREAT STORY:) |