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| Delilah Wigglesworth 2004-10-03 ch 3,  | abuseThis has got to be the most hilarious thing ever! Daniel giving a "defensive *BELCH*" - a DEFENSIVE belch? WHAT IS A DEFENSIVE BELCH? I lubbed it. Truly hilarious and wonderfully rib-ticklin'. Liked all the little Jack-Sam fluff bits thrown in, too. Hahhaa. God. The food, the food! Where did all these ideas COME from? Lubbed this story SO MUCH! :) |
| Lerrinus 2004-09-24 ch 3, anon. | abuseOMG that was scary, shattering pancakes and moving soup and poor Siler - but he got his Froot loops, or should I say Jack's fruit loops! Loved it! :-D Keep up the great work! |
| Laitaine-Arnostale 2004-06-22 ch 3, | abusei think a fire-stick is a more primitive name for the staff weapon, and the evil torture things that make your eyes and mouth light up (but not nose...?) are called pain sticks. but whatever, we got the meaning...although coming from teal'c that was unexpected and highly amusing. great story overall. |
| EB :) 2004-04-22 ch 3, anon. | abuseOMG! LMAO! My face hurts from laffing. Great story - really want to see this one on television. Keep up the great work! :) |
| rhia 2004-04-21 ch 3, anon. | abusethankyou that was fun |
| happy molecule 2004-04-20 ch 3, | abusemeep...that dinner was...scary... |
| Lisa 2004-04-20 ch 3, anon. | abuseI love everything you write and I snortimer (mixture of snorting and mirth) WAY too much. Keep 'em coming! |
| The rose 2004-04-18 ch 3, anon. | abuseOMG the breakfast, lunch and dinners from hell and beyond! :-O I'm scared...very scared. (Well done...froot loops 4evr!) @>--'-,- |
| custardpringle 2004-04-18 ch 3, | abuseYes, that's exactly what a fire stick is. Come to think of it, it may not have been a safe idea for me to tell you that. (That's a compliment.) |
| Feline Feral 2004-04-18 ch 3, | abuseThat was great. I loved this story. It was so very funny. You did an awesome job. :) |
| Mara Jade Jedi 2004-04-18 ch 3, | abuseCLose, that's a Goa'uld Pain stick. Great finish, i love the insane humour! Well done! |
| kelinor 2004-04-18 ch 3, | abuse*prods her food hesitantly* I'm really, really scared now... BWHAHA! *dies laughing* HOW funny is this, I couldn't stop giggling^-^ the soup! and the jell-o... and Daniel... and the doctor(^^) and I love Siler's revenge! *dies again* Seriously though, the characterizations are perfect, and I love the subconscious thoughts of Jack. And I can't remember what the fire stick thingy is. xX sorry... Anyway, amazing stuff! *sticks her hand in box of fruit loops and wanders off munching happily* ~Kitty |
| Moon-Raver 2004-04-17 ch 3, | abuseSimply amazing. I LOVED it. I kinda felt sorry for Siler until the end. I really like the way you did it all. Kudos to you on a job well done. I just can't convie how much I loved that... such crazy foods... exploding...living...crawling... AMAZING! |
| Moon-Raver 2004-04-17 ch 2, | abuseFirst of all, Thanks for the psychic hug! ^_^ OMG still laughing! One Chapter to go! |
| Moon-Raver 2004-04-17 ch 1, | abuseOH MY GOD! I Love it! I love the way you've captured Jack's mind and thoughts! I was snickering throughout the entire thing and now I can't get I smile off my face! Time to read Chapter 2! |