Yeah, the wall of text has me skipping this story faster than you can believe. Please correct the formatting issues. Put in paragraphs, line breaks...anything really.

so, this is a really good beginning and you really should continue it...but I'm not going to hold my breath...

Oops. Came in here thinking it was... O_O'

~Siona

There better be more,that's all I gotta say, you aren't gonna leave it on a cliffhanger like that are you!! Please NO!!! I LOVE this story so far!
Ja ne
APD

There better be more,that's all I gotta say, you aren't gonna leave it on a cliffhanger like that are you!! Please NO!!! I LOVE this story so far!
Ja ne
APD

When are you going to write part2&3 I can't wait long

Good Job