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| fractured-fairytales-awards 2005-01-24 ch 1,  | abuseThis has been nominated at Fractured Fairytales Awards for the following categories: Lilith Fair Silent Screams Please notify us if you're accepting the nomination. |
| CrimsonCat 2003-12-15 ch 3, | abuseI don't think that these ficlets romanticize Lilah too much. But then again, you are showing a side of her that I always wanted to believe was there. In other words, bravo! I love them. The first one hit home hard, because I often whisper confessions into my loved one's ear while they are sleeping. Or pretending to sleep. I love this. You're amazing. |
| The Grynne 2003-11-16 ch 3, | abuseThe two short sentences really hit deeply but by the end the story has lost most of its punch. The two sections are out of balance - the second seems too long, the emotional impact not equal to the beginning. |
| The Grynne 2003-11-16 ch 2, | abuseSome of Lilah's sentences sound a little awkward, false, but otherwise it's an excellent job. |
| The Grynne 2003-11-16 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. Perfect. |
| AngelWings8 2003-11-16 ch 3, | abuseBeautiful fic. Keep writing. |
| Imzadi 2003-11-15 ch 3, | abuseSometimes even I feel a little sorry for Lilah. This is one of them. Well done, Jaclyn. |
| Imzadi 2003-11-15 ch 2, | abuseThis is one of the many reasons why I love Wes. He's got so much compassion and understanding: too much for his own good, maybe. Again, just a great story. |
| Imzadi 2003-11-15 ch 1, | abuseVery nice. I do see Lilah doing this; she's not completely without a conscience. Good story. |
| xanya-forever 2003-11-15 ch 3, | abuseI really like these three fics but they're so short! This is not good, as you're a great writer, especially for this ship, and I would definitely like to read more. Apart from that, excellent work. You've got right into the thrust (hahah) of their relationship. Write more! |
| Chelsea 2003-11-15 ch 3, anon. | abusePlease tell me your writing more! Please please please! I love it! |
| Freakazoid 2003-11-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseSo sad. :( 'But they mean everything to him.' You give their conflicted hearts so much oomph with so few words too. Just lovely. |
| xanya-forever 2003-11-14 ch 1, | abuseThis was great. A little short, but still really good. I love Wes and Lilah together, and there's not as many fics as there should be about them. I feel very sorry for Lilah in your fic, and I like the way Wes handles it. Excellent work, write more (longer)! |