 Lilly Tagloft 2009-10-13 . chapter 1"Maybe he was destined to do that."
"Shut up."
Bwahahaha. Perfect ending and it had a nice little discussinon about fate snaked in there as well. Honestly I like your stories and I hope you keep writing them. :) |
 Gingham and Basil 2008-01-22 . chapter 1Perfect. Funny and appealing.
"Maybe he was destined to do that."
"Shut up."
HAHAHAH. lovely. :)
Toodles
-G&B |
 sodapop765 2007-10-02 . chapter 1HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. |
 HPLadyBelle 2006-08-12 . chapter 1I believe I'm the first to review this story this year.
It was great! Your characterizations were very nice.
Good job. |
 Springrain 2005-01-03 . chapter 1Great little bit of dialogue. They all seem in character too! |
 Irish Silhouette 2004-11-07 . chapter 1I love that- the Marauders are so great. |
 Erhothwen 2004-02-15 . chapter 1Awesome Marauder story! Humorous, refreshing, and a delightful read.
*adds to Favorite's List*
Lovely story,
Erhothwen |
 Anna 2004-01-30 . chapter 1 Wow, this is a great story! I think you got most of the characters spot on. I love your Peter. You capture his follower aspect without making him a total dishrag.
The only part I found a bit strange was the way the guys were discussing Lily. I've never heard a guy say, 'So, do you think she likes me?' But maybe they just aren't asking me that question. *smile*
This was a great story, thanks for writing it! |
 A Thousand Paper Cranes 2004-01-10 . chapter 1Hehe...that was very cute. ^_^ I likes. |
 Scarg 2003-12-31 . chapter 1Aw, that's sweet. Great little ficlet, just brilliant. Kudos. *applauds and grins* |
 Tara 2003-12-30 . chapter 1 Cute |
 Trinity Day 2003-11-22 . chapter 1A very cute, enjoyable fic. It seems to be very in character for Sirius to not believe in fate, and to find the idea of it very disturbing. Well done. |
 kantomon 2003-11-17 . chapter 1Cute, your marauder fanfics are great. I miss the Essential guide, though. ;_; |
 TheBabyPhatPrincess 2003-11-15 . chapter 1This is really cute. I don't mean that in a bad way. I think that Sirus was right when he said that Destiny is like a cowards way out, because of what's happened in the POA. But still I hope there's going to be more, beacuse it's really making me think about if they find anything out to do with their destinys.
*~Lady Undomiel~* |
 dark star11 2003-11-15 . chapter 1 One question. Is this a ficlet or not? |