Whoa, Krieli. You wrote a DBZ fic. *grin* That's awesome. I remember the Cell Saga... It was like my whole world when it first aired on Toonami. I'm still an avid Trunks fan. I need a poster...
Great fic. I'm hoping Trunks and Yarika hook up. And the V/B you stuck in there was excellent!
Kudos!
GG

short...not sweet, but thats what makes it good. It goes somewhere, has a point. I liked it alot :)

sweet/sad fic. Keep writing.

Ohhhhhhhh! That was heartbreaking! Especially when Bulma said "that's what your father said" when Trunks left. And Trunks finding a girl to love and her dying. Of course I liked that Vegeta said he loved Bulma- well he kinda said it. And what Trunks remembered Gohan telling him what Goku had said about love. That was beautiful and so Goku in his sweet serious mode. So all in all I loved that fic. Keep writing!

Great writing, Vegeta was very much in character. You should write more DBZ!

Oh my. That was so beautiful. I'm crying, can you believe it? Oh, please...write a sequal!

OOOOOHHH! This was SOOO sweet! _ Definitly VERY good! _

I just realized that I never reviewed this story the first time I read it. I remember writing a review but I guess something happened and it didn't get posted. Anyway, great work. I'd love to see you write some more DBZ fics, you really do Vegeta well. Keep it up.

oooh.. NICE

Poor Trunks... but at least things didn't end up TOO bad.

*sniff, sniff* Poor Trunks, I hate seeing him sad... it just breaks my heart. But you did a wonferful job on this story, I really love it.

Awesome!

Beautiful. Sad. Original. In a word, perfect. I hope to see more of your works in this category. Keep writing and don't forget to have a nice day.

Another great story Kristen, you really have a talent when you write to show the reader what you see in your head. It seems to come so naturally to you, I really hope someday I have your talent for writing. Thank you for posting this story and I hope to read more of your stories soon. Your an amazing author.

that was a good story