|Reviews for Undone|
| kitty13492 11/17/11 . chapter 1
This is a great poem!
| audi katia 4/8/04 . chapter 1
Definatly Robin. It portrays him so well. Yet another awesome poem! I don't really know why, but this one made me smile. You have a way with feelings and emotions. Keep it up!
| TanukiGirl22 4/1/04 . chapter 1
i love this type of fic/poem, you can never tell who it really is who is speaking. at first i had robin in mind, then beastboy, then cyborg, and atthe en di really didn't know who to choose. great job!
| Kay-san1ShinomoriMiyu 1/7/04 . chapter 1
*sighs contently* Pure, sweet angst. Ok, ok, I'm weird. But I love angst. VERY very deep poem. I love it! Good, interesting way of putting things. Ghosts of yesterday...War against myself. I love it. If you wrote fanfics...of that would be wonderfully angsty. Great job!
| Averi 11/21/03 . chapter 1
I love some of your wording (i.e. 'ghosts of yesterday') but I'm not so sure about the whole poem. The meaning is a little vague, (self-loathing? depression?) and (sorry) it sounds a bit dramatic. I know I shouldn't talk, but the end seems a bit 'soap-opera-actress-slamming-a-door-and-flouncing- out-y'. Well, not that harsh, but I think a couple rewrites would realy let your way with words shine better.