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| Verity Kindle 2006-05-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseSpelling and punctuation errors are really distracting. "Sole" instead of "soul", etc. |
| angels-slayer-lol 2004-02-19 ch 1,  | abuse*cries* that was sad, but great :) |
| Wolf Maid 2004-02-15 ch 1, | abuseThat is a very good poem! Very pretty, and relative...you stayed in his character...Great job! |
| april 2003-12-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseexcellent! Good ryhmikng and stuffs. |
| Shadowlands 2003-12-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseSorry It's not a signed in review, but I'm in Com Tech class and if I sign in, my evil sadistic teacher will keep my after school. But anyways: Nice poem. It rhymes. I'm loving the rhyming. (I'm in a lifelong debate about which poems are better: ryming or non-rhyming. I say it all depends on what's in the poem, but my friends are all on different sides.) It makes sense to me. (Maybe that's a bad thing, maybe not. I don't know.) But 'keep safe tonight, O wandering sole' is pretty funny. It's soul, not sole. Sole is a fish. Or the bottom of your shoe. But I think you were loking to say 'soul'. That is all. |
| Baby Bunnie1 2003-11-25 ch 1, | abuseHii! Wow...this poem was...awesome!You gotta write more stories...or poems.Keep it up!:) :) :) Luv, Baby Bunnie xoxoxo |
| Smego Baggins 2003-11-20 ch 1, | abuseHey, said I would review, didn’t I? It’s Smeg. I didn’t know you could write this GOOD. It’s a beautiful poem, and I hope you write more. Love, Peace, and The Beatles forever, Smeg. PS: See ya at school tomorrow. |
| your friend ham 2003-11-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseit is me! your friend who is too lazy to log in. it think it is crappy and make no sence what so ever! no not realy it is very good and made me cry (tear):) :) :) :) delliham |
| Lady Lanet 2003-11-15 ch 1, | abuseThis is very deep and very sincer. |