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Kayti
2009-11-12 . chapter 1
I love the names. Siria like Sirius. Jamie like James. Luna like Moony!
Soccergirl0388
2007-07-28 . chapter 9
a little confusing but its a great story keep writing
Nanotech0.
2006-05-07 . chapter 1
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Allerson
2005-09-24 . chapter 9
Holly,
I'm glad that you have finally decided to continue the story. PLEASE keep going... I am so waiting to find out exactly what Luna and Violet are.
By the way, the last chapter was awesome.
destiny
2005-06-09 . chapter 9
hey! good story going... thanks for those quick updates... keep writing!
Eternal-Damnation
2005-05-29 . chapter 9
Ah-ha! Here it is, chapter nine! When you said you updated at Anime North I was like YES! I always love reading your stories...or having you read them to me at lunch lmao :P Your so going to get published by the time your sixteen, I just know it! Now onto the story
The transition from the flying at the begining was perfect, I bet alot of people are dying to know what that was about. And Moonys letter hehe, god he sounds like me, never enough cash lol And hey, I know the chapter wasn't as long as you had liked it to be but i know what you mean when you say its hard to find your muse. Just wait till the half-blood prince comes out, I'm sure it'll come running back lol. But yes, even know it was short it was of fantastic quality and I loved it
Keda Sun
2005-05-15 . chapter 9
BABYE!! i'm SO proud of you, it was really good but i got kind of confused, what was the thing with the dragons at the beginning? anywya i couldnt find any spelling mistakes except in this sentance: ""Se had the urge to start bouncing in her seat, but restrained herself not to. No more tea for her… well, after this cup"" I think you meant 'she' instead of 'se' anyway great work and PLEASE keep updating. All my love
*kisses* Lucky Lena.
TheGame2112
2005-05-14 . chapter 9
Hey Holly. I cant believe I'm still getting emails from FanFiction about your story. I re-read your chapters and thought they were really good. But a more important topic, do you hate me? After Ashley and I 'broke up' we never talked. Im just wondering, at least respond

-Adam
filly-foxy
2005-05-14 . chapter 8
yo!
so, you finally update it, eh?
even thouhg ive had to sit through the whole thing about 3 or 4 times... *sweatdrop*
lol
no, its good... you have to spend less time with the typing though... geez!
put me in it! again... lol
yup
and thats that
and i promise ill update soon
before christmas...
yup
Tipix
2005-05-14 . chapter 9
THANKYOU-THANKYOU-THANKYOU FOR UPDATING! Yay 'Luna'!! I love this story so much and when you stopped updating, I thought you had finished with FanFic! (glad I was wrong) keep writing!(LOL- If you didn't know.. this is Carey-Ann)
Keda Sun
2005-03-28 . chapter 8
Hello My Lovely friend, we havent talked in a while have we? no believe not, i was starting to forget what was happening in your story:O so i decided to re-read it. now, i am DYING for an update, i finsihed my story now its your turn! PLZ UPDATE GURL! i'm dying for the next chapter!! PLEASE even if its only for me! thanks sweetie, all my love,
Lucky Lena (hehehehe you know who i am)
thecollectiveunconscious
2004-10-15 . chapter 8
hey!! this is a friend of "Lucky Lena's" from school~
she recommended this story to me, and i read it and...i think it's really good!!
and...you're another anime fan!! *glomps ya* whee~ i love finding anime fans! Lena's not really an anime fan...>.>
well, i like this story that you have here! very interesting...^^
hmm..ideas? none at the moment, but when i have one, i'll be sure to give it to you.
see you around!!
Alison
2004-10-11 . chapter 1
Holly, do you still need more reviews? Because you haven't updated any of your novels in MONTHS!! I've been dying! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update SOON!
Clarke
2004-09-12 . chapter 1
Omg, the storys so awesome so far, Im really intrested in reading the rest of the story. keep up the good work!
MakeRumNotWar
2004-09-07 . chapter 8
bwah!! and this story has been up this long and i hav only read it now!! I like it alot!! Nice work and update...please? YOU ROCK!!
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