It seriously made me cry! But that's a good thing, because that means it's well written, huh? ;_; Such a good story!

Aw...this poem is so sweet! I feel bad for Hakkai (*hugs him*). I'm usually not a fan of Hakkai and Gojyo pairings, but this one was excellant! Congrats!

Interesting...kinda more cheesy than sad. :\

Ah...yet again...another wonderful piece by fall. Very wonderful. beautiful. Touches the core. Well felt air of sadness. loneliness.
I really like how you write especially because in your fics, you introduce books and other pieces of literature that i've either snobbed, ignored or never heard of...you make me want to read them. Thank you very much fall! Do continue with your great writing. ^^

*sob, weep, tremble*

*sniff, sniff... Blows nose on hanky*

You're making me cry... T_T But yet, it is true, everyone shares the same inevitable fate. To live, then to die. The same old, same old.

~Hibiemi/YumeNeko

WAH!

very nice, and very depressing.
Great job, great poem (*waves* 'Yeats fan!' banner). I'll get round to the stuff I promised you once my brain works. ^_^;

"would pick up the same book that he reads every night" --> he read every night

wow...how creepy. do u noe that im currently working on a 38 fic that has an almost similar theme to urs? oh dear...i do hope u dun think im copying u, ne.
but anyways, i love this fic. the poem is very appropriate indeed. its short but gets to the bottom of things. i love it.
lastly, arigato for doing a 38 fic. (",)

Beautiful, and very sad, and quite true; we all will face this eventuality. You are a very talented writer; I always enjoy finding a new post by you.

that was a really touching piece.
take care & hope you feel better soon! =)