I apologize I forgot ot include this in my statement... this is a rant on a character that takes more into perspective from both sides of the coin and doesn't take a long to read... its much shorter... and less of a lecture and more of a short shpiel!

The heart of the thoughtless one... Saki Xiawang...

First of all I think the story is exceptionally well done for many reasons... most of which have already been named or the author knows what they are... I loved the story and hope you put out more... however I apologize for ranting and if the author wishes to remove this that person is welcome to but I would like to state the following...
Before anyone links to antivasma's personal rant on the downplays of nabiki's character I would like to state a few things so he doesn;t skew your views or poison your brain with his obscene bouts of stupidity...
First of all... Ranma 1/2 is a fictional manga/anime written by rumiko takahashi... anyone who thinks they know the characters... knows nothing... Takahashi wrote the series ONLY takahashi knows the characters...
Two... if you stay on speculation of a character's worth... ONE nabiki is a secondary character in the series who is not meant to develop... she is the static in the eye of a storm of dynamics... she is the outside factor of the takahashi universe... she doesn't solve things with her fists she solves them with her mind... she is cold, calculable, analytical, and mischevious given the things SHOWN about her character...
Second the majority of Antivasma's proof is based upon slapstick and joke scenes... for example... the statement of her selling him off to the yakuza is based in the Ten Yen Bet scenario in which a single panel shows ranma being given to the Yakuza because of the meals enourmous price... However ranma has done just as much to the tendo home as nabiki did in the ten yen bet saga... For example... Ranma during the entire gambling king scenario lost the ENTIRE TENDO ESTATE... and still won it back.. just like nabiki did...
Third of all... As for fanfiction it is a fictional scenario in which an author writes a story about a character or series that does things from there perspective... Imitation is the highest form of flattery as it were... If you do not like the way a character is portrayed... and find it your LIFES GOAL to tell the world how evil ONE charfacter is... you need to stop reading fanfiction which is for FUN and ENTERTAINMENT not EDUCATIONAL value.. you need to turn off the computer... walk out of the room... and get in your car, drive to the mall and start a social life... That is not a personal crack on Antivasma's character that is a view I hold true for most people... however I do not normally express such unless the person... as in this case is trying to force their views oin others... One... the character is a static secondary character used for plot contrivance and comic value... two... who cares if she is the devil himself being incarnated to steal all your souls! Its a fictional piece of literature... as a mater of fact its a slapstick action comedy with a few romantic elements tossed in for twist value... If you have to validate your life by telling others the degrading 'eviliscitude' of (Fill in the blank with any character being ranted on) you need to reevaluate your view on fiction and fan based writings...
Coments criticisms and hatemail allike are welcome... if you have any disputes with my views please note as such... my e-mail is available to all who wish to comment... I apologize if this bother's anyone but I felt I must make this point... And Antivasma if you dissagree with my views you are welcome to debate them with me via e-mail at any time... Thank you for your time...
The heart of the thoughtless one... Saki Xiawang...

I actually liked this story, but once again:
http://w.fictionpress.com/read.php?storyid=1637402 to spread some basic information about the character :\

good fanfic my friend lol i constantly checked up and i was starting to get annoyed at well i know it takes a long time to write a fanfic considering it took me like a day to write one that was barly a page long but anyway very good fanfic

hey, i luv that story!! thats like my favorite story! u should write more Ranma 1/2 ones, thier really good ^ ^

Great story. Magic Pickle of Happiness? Now
doesn't that just sound etchi!
The though of Ranma dancing around happy to
have breasts again was just funny!
Interesting way to end everything. Why did the
monster go after Ranma? He was in amle form and
it had only fed on females before.

Good story. I have enjoyed reading it from the beginging to the end. The chapters flowed well together and the story kept together nicely.
The characters acted as they should have given the problems they faced.
Great job and I look forward to more stories from you.

Finally, a conclusion. Like the rest of your fics, it's a nice heart-warming story that kept me wanting for more. I hope that your future works will be as good if not better. ^_^v

i really like this story. you should make one where it is in a different anime, preferably sailor moon.

Shampoo worring abought the state of her
'hoo hoos' was cute.

I really liked this fanfic. I havn't been reading alot latly but this caught my eye and is verry inovative and not just another fluffy tangent of the origional story. Keep writing! I can't wait to see your next chapter.

LOL...this is fun! The idea, as far as i've seen anyway, is really original, and you're pulling it off really well. Nice job! Be checking back for more!

Great story. I hope you continue it.

Nabiki's thougth procceses on staying up versus
punishment were cute as all hell!
Shampoo telling Cologne she behave like a
violent tomboy was great. I think she has spent
a little too much time with Ranma!
You may want to put in that Shampoo felt a
little better abought being in kitten form
since she could see better in the dark.
Loved the ending line. Very ironic.

Eh? What did Cologne mean by 'what did he do to Kasumi'? I thought she would normally see Kasumi as a kid... or is it something else?
You know, I don't see an ending to the story yet, or anything even coming close. Just a thought.