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| kokoronagomu 2006-08-31 ch 1, | abusethe beautiful thing about reading fanfics is that i can see the characters, actions, situations and motivations through someone elses eyes. very insightful. thank you, ginny |
| Tsukiyo no Yume 2005-04-08 ch 1, | abuseAWESOME. I love the timelessness you express through Misao's thoughts. For instance, "never noticing the evanescence of life." One would think that having had so much experience with death, Misao and Aoshi would find it impossible to escape. But you point out that perhaps they've learned from all the pain in their lives how to live in the present, how to look at life as an unending cycle, not just a brief race in all of time. Then the line "no change lasts forever" serves to augment that idea; that what goes around, comes around. I love this poem - it's so unique and well written!! ~Tsukiyo |
| Rhyannon 2004-10-18 ch 1, | abuse...i love it...and i especialy love what u wrote at the end..., tears falling... |
| MissTeya 2003-12-08 ch 1, | abuseThis is an absolutely beautiful poem. I really like the second stanza and the tiny bit of parallel language. I'm a sucker for good structure. Amazing job! |
| ESP 2003-11-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhat an amazing peice of poetry. You convey such an interesting concept, and it flows well. It almost made me cry, but for the hopeful ending. Good job. I'm off to read more of your stuff! ESP P.S. Good job on the summary. It draws me in and lets me know you are an intellegent writer. I knew the instant I clickedo n your name that I would have a fun time reading your fics. |
| MissBehavin 2003-11-15 ch 1, | abuseYou're very talented. That's how a poem should be. The style is different, but you remind me of Robert Frost in that it left me with the same kind of feeling I always get when I read his work. Keeping writing with this same kind of passion and I'll be sure to keep reading! |