Incredibly frikin' good man! I Don''t fully understand why Picollo cares so much, but it dosen't reallay matter, does it? If only there was a way for me to properly rate this particular work of fiction.
I find nothing wrong wirh this story.
Sincerely,
Star Captain Aries Greymon.

shhhh! ::points ot other readers reading her story:: dont' tell them its impossible! ::realizes other readers are watcihng her point o them as they read, quits pointing:: just enjoy the story and ignore my little thing. anyway, this is an alternate time line story. maybe the androids aren't made as well as they are in the regualr DBZ time line, i dont know. but in my starnge little world, its possible...

How could 17 destroy 18? IT IS A SCIENTIFIC IMPOSSIBILITY! The part with piccolo and saiai was interesting though.

Gonna read more!

Piccolo is a sweetie! :)

Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...Piccolo's getting a girlfriend... hehe...this is really interesting!

Very interesting...Piccolo romances are always good in my book! Thanks for taking the advice and putting the chapters together. Saves space, makes people happy and gives a longer read each time! :)