Very nice, I liked the insights into their characters :)

Very nice story. I liked it a lot.

the whole thing was lovely. i congratulate you on such fragile and steel-strong work. keep it up!

Last chapter was simply amazing! You managed to expose Goku's deeper side excellently (not many manage to do that so well!).

Kenren
P.s. Hope you have fun in Japan-it's my dream to go there! And sorry for not reviewing this marvelous piece of work before but my computer at home went bankers due to 27 viruses! (yeah that's what happens when you forget to install an anti-virus)

This is absolutely beautiful! Flawless! It is as if you actually look at the characters and capture their essence in words. Wonderful piece of work!! Keep it up!

Kenren

^__^ A good fic! Really cool, and not to mention original. Hey, be back real quick from Japan! I'll be looking forward to that X'mas fic.

*babbles incoherently* OOh. *wipes at eye* a little tearage there...Goku just does that to me and you've -got- him. Consistently great ^.^ I love this fic. I have a feeling I'll be coming back to reread it until I'm absolutely sick of it. And then I'll come back anyway. ^.^ He...

The one thing I really loved most about this was how each one kept close to them one thing that meant so much to them. A pocket watch, a feather, a headband and (even Mr. Nonattachment himself) broken beads.

Very nice character study!

Very nice, well written. You do a fantastic job of bringing rich, tactile reality to clothing and objects which have no 3 dimensional existence.

Finished already? *cries* i totally forgot it was a 4-parter.

but really, it truly was an enjoyable read, and i can only hope to improve my writing techniques in some way, so that i can make any of my other future RP's juts as enjoyable, although not in the same way, but enjoyabel enough.

thank you, again, and don't stop writing your wonderful works (i also luved Gojyo's Birthday fic)

How did I miss this? The only flaw I can point out is the capital YES, it slightly jolts the momentum of the whole piece.

Besides that, lovely. Very well depicted (and described), and I'm a sucker for anyone describing the four sleeping, so that's always a plus.

Looking forward to your next fic!

Very interesting concept. Quite descriptive. I could picture each one of them fairly clearly in my mind as I read. I very novel idea. Good work!

nice details. =)

this fic is goin' under my faves list. dunnoe wer u got ur brilliant brain cells for creating such an exquisite fic. u thinking of selling ur brain cells? cuz i want sum... *gasps*
anyways, have fun in japan (WAAH...SO LUCKY!) and if u happen to bump into our dear bishies, say hi for me, will ya?
chowz (",)

Love the descriptions. *_*