A most interesting poem. Although it probably needed some spacing, after doing some quick "paragraphing edits" to make it easier to read, I found that I really liked it! It's deep, and I really think the whole Aoshi/Misao thing is a sad romance...if the guy finds his heart, it's a potential HEA (Happily Ever After), but on the flipside, if he's gone for good, she'd be the type to wait until the end of eternity for him...which I find really on the edge of angst/despair. A most dramatic poem, however, and I loved every bit of it! (except the spacing...) _

it's definately long, yet good

oh I LOVE THIS ONE! it's so sad... where is there a kenshin poetry contest? WHERE! PLEASE TELL ME!

I would have to say this is one of ur best poams and Misao is pretty smart in this poam
Deanna

That was really good! I hope you win the contest. _

Whoa...that was long...and good of course! _ This poem flows very nicely and is written eloquently...i think you have a great chance of winning that RK poetry contest! well...good luck!