Well, I think that the poem "Under That Smile" is better than "Empty", but both show the confusion in Soujirou's head. And that's what I like.

Kisses !

it's OK

*sob* Poor poor Soujiro...that was great! _

thats soo wonderful! u have a great great talent that is most certainly true!
-mKs

This was a great poem!
Every single thing about was true about Soujiro!
It was also very sad.
Keep up the good work! _

oh my god! my eyes were watering up the whole time! that was so true! i love your writing so much! and i really loved this poem! and the fact that it was about soujiro makes it even better!

(3)(3) kiss kiss for soujiro, my one and only true love!

omg... dat poem is so TRUE! i like smile all da freakin time... but in life, i truly juss smile... mai smile is empty... for it is not wut i truly feel inside...

why don't you like it? i thought that you portrayed soujiro nicely! this was kind of sad though...

I liked it!