Really liked the end part with Kohaku. good job

So good...but so sad.

Awh. It was so sad and cute at the same time! Great job!

that was totaly asome you should write more my email is

The ending was perfect! Great job.

aw, this made me cry. it twas sad! i loved it. it just teaches you that not everything turns out the way you want it to, but it always turns out right.

KKL

I give you props. You're the first person I've read to mix Christianity and anime/manga together. It turned out cool; orginal.*raise a 'solid' fist of encouragement* I also thought is was cool how you included Kohaku. Nobody really talks about him and for you to write a section with him conversing his niece was sweet. To add to the cuteness were the children. How adorable where they?(rhetorical question)

aw...u heartless creep! u made me use up all my tissues!

wow

ah

*runs into door unconsious*

so sad, but not depressing. Twas beautiful.

You know, when I was reading this thing halfway through, it struck me as so odd...because everything pointed to a happy ending and the family, and so forth...the only thing I thought you could have done different was change the story rating. It kinda gives the story away before we even get to hear it...and I kinda wish I didn't see the whole "Tragedy/Angst" thing at the top before I started reading...because I really felt like I was going for a joy ride...until the end. Anyway, plushfruits to you for this one. This one is an excellent one-shot!

KAWAII OR WHAT!

this as so sweet!

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omg thats so sad, tears welled up in my eyes.. and now their flowing

wow you're a very talented author

oh! Soo cute and sad. I wanted t o cry the first time i read this. You are very creative maybe one day you will become a great writer keep on writen'!

i cried, it was so good