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| DragonGirl1136 2008-01-14 ch 1,  | abuseAw. So tragic. XD |
| Atavaka 2005-02-01 ch 1, | abuseAh, this story's funny! Not to mention original! But, I have to second Khajiit's suggestion to fix the format! A few spaces and line breaks here and there would really make this easier to read... |
| Khajiit 2004-11-02 ch 1, | abuseAwe...Poor Smith... No program deserves such cruel treatment. Ah well, great job. Fix the format though, my eyes are killing me. |
| Spicy chicken 2003-11-20 ch 1, | abuseThis was so funny, i was laughing so hard my mom came in and aked me what was wrong. Good Job. But you're so mean to Rupert, I just wanted to go give him a hug! lol and you might want to format it diffrently. It's kinda hard to read |
| Exobiologist 2003-11-17 ch 1, | abuseOh! Poor Smith! What a funny story! It was really good, but perhaps you should find someway to format it so it's a little easier to read. Really hilarious, though. |
| Tee4 2003-11-17 ch 1, | abusehonestly man that was the funniest ** i have read in a long time! lmfao!! i can just imagine it!! i have one suggestion tho, that u like space ** out so i can read it better! help us rupert!! bow down to the klondike it or die! that was so mean to smith! |
| Daz Fae 2003-11-17 ch 1, | abuseO_o...aw that was hella wrong...Nice fic though, funny as hell, too bad im at skool and I cant be too loud...^_^ hehe, one of my friends got in trouble, good job! |
| Beth-Star 2003-11-17 ch 1, | abusePoor smithy!! *sends him hugs and ice-cream* cool fic, your formattings gone a bit mental but still good. But what exactly is a klondike bar?? i don't think they exist in Britain!! :'( |
| crazytook 2003-11-17 ch 1, | abuseHahahaha! Dude, that was hysterical. I think you really managed to capture what the real question of human existance is. What would one do for a klondike bar? I think that's what these movies really were all about. All kidding aside, this was funny and a great break from all this angsty matrix fanfic everywhere (not that its all bad) anyway, KUDOS! -crazytook |
| Xenomina 2003-11-16 ch 1, | abusePoor Smith, poor poor smith. |