So now Takehiro thinks Hanabi's name is Hyu?

Whoops! That's not good.

Please continue.

-JWchan -

Wow!
Great story!
Keep up the good work_
Update sooner.

Hi, chelsey-chan *pats your shoulder* nice attempt. Normally i R & R back to some, this story is interesting please cotinue. Well, she must be a special jounin to still have to walk with mommy and daddy, ne? You might have gramma mistakes but i have heaps. -_- i never wrote anything when i was your age... Oh, yes Kakashi is Sasuke's uncle in my fic. I'll post up my cast and there roles in the future, ja ne Chelsey-chan.
Gambatte durian

cool story! please continue on!

Hmm ... it's good! I like it! I have honestly never ever seen a Hanabi story and it's so awsome to read something different! _ You've got a great story so far! I can't wait to read the rest of it! .

SpiritGoddess

Great begining to something that can become great )

I hope you continue with this story.

Do you roleplay? If you do visit:

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You might get to play Hanabi if you want to.

If your interessted, send me an e-mail.

Oh continue on this story, I like the way its going.

Wow, you're really good oh and to the guy above me, he's talking about the incidend with the Hyuga and the cloud.

uh... cloud is now allowed in the village... they arent enemies anymore...