please update soon!

Oh my god, I feel so bad for her. I would have torn him to shreds!! Starting with his fingers...hehe...

Please continue writing.

Great story! I'm looking forward for the next chapter.

Must've hurt getting an shotgun blown off in the chest

Just when things are finally looking up, she gets a shot gun to the chest. Hopefully she'll be able to finish of Mayara without the other Predators having to step in; including the rest of her family. I very much doubt her mother would disown her, mothers love their babies, no matter what they do. :D Here's hoping everything turns out somewhat happily. Greaty work, can't wait for the next chapter!!

I like the story so far. Please continue story.

O.k. I've read the fic before and... wow... it's... hot and... cool... Lots of emotin and stuff like that, fightin' and junk, just the right amount, not too little not too much. Perfect. UPDATE REALLY SOON! PLEASE! ( big ole puppy-dog eyes)

hey I love this story infact this is what inspired me to start reading and writing fanfics, I read it a while ago and loved it question when will u do chapter 19 I wanna knoew what happens so bad

Dude!! Da'tou still kicks **! I could just see the look on Kartk's face when he got that hook to the face! Correct me if I'm wrong, but didn't he catch the two of them in there...ahem...birthday suits? Even that would have given Kartk wide eyes!

Apart from that, this chapter was awesome! Sly devil is right! But how is there relationship gonn progress if there is so many restrictions. And waht about the village? Aren't the rest of her family looking for Da'tou? I know I would. I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the awesome work!!

wow, excellent chapter, though i read the 18'th version through the link on your profile, all is still good!!
i know you took some time to get this chapter out, but still, good for you!!
i can't wait for the next one.
from
Draguna

wow, good story, hope to read more soon...

** dude! when you updating?!?!

excelent story! i love that last chapters too, all of them really. please update soon!
from
Draguna and you rnew reader
update soon!

This is such a wonderful fic is excellently written and has wonderful characters. I loved reading this it’s just a beautiful piece of fan fiction.

The relationship between the Da'tou and Gr'it-in, is played out really well with great tension and passion and a hell of a lot of feeling.

Please continue this I can't wait for the next update.

My apologises that I was so late to review this.