Very good story. It's well written.

Very good!
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Zarbok

This is good. Update as soon as possible.

Very Good story and well described, keep up the good work!
-Hello Blackdawn-70631, I finaly got on the net and read your story since Im in the reserve as a G.I. I didnt get shipped in Irak...yet. I sure hope Ill get to read the sequel to "rupture in the city" when it comes out.
P.S.Shaloni and Joe can breathe easily. AC has joined the Green Berets and seems to have vanished.As for Commando115(turns pale) hes goin to join the Canadian Army. DONT UNDERESTIMATE THEM! I SPEAK BY EXPERIENCE!O_O I went up against them in a combat simulation this fall and let me tell ya...THEY AINT WEAK! THEIR AWESOME! THERE PROS! THERE...like us_. Hope to see your next story soon(well as soon as I can read it...)

First story I checked in two months is yours and I like it instantly. Whats up with that? Must be because your a darn good writer.
P.S. How are Shaloni and Joe?_

Ah, it is great story (like all your other :)
While reading chapter two I hoped that Da'tou will get rid of assassin and so she did. Please continue with this story and like others I also beg... update son ;)

Update soon.

Bravo!
Very good story please update soon.
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Zarbok

Please update!
I understand writers block or lacking in reviews, but please update this story!

Update soon.

I am becoming a fan of your storys.
P.S.
Thanx for the letter.