Hi!
Well, I liked this fic and the lemon was totally fine! (as you asked our opinion on that).It could have been a little more detailed (lol, I sound like a total perv!)but it was fine.
I just have to say that it's strange that the fic ends without Gohan ever realising what Videl did for him.
Don't you think?
Anyway, Girl, it was great!
Take care!

Wow... very well done! Always nice to see lemon done tastefully (forgive the pun). Read the whole thing in one go (the joys of speed reading), but now I'm jealous. I'll be looking at your other stories soon. Great work!

*rubs eyes*
I read the whole story again to refresh my memory.. Good job on another completed story! =D =D

Your efforts were not futile, especially the last chapter. Keep up the awesome work, and writing. Now I'm off to read your other story!

Xox GD xoX

nice chapter.

Keep going!

wow i love this story. im gonna go read ur other ones now lol.

I njoyed this story a lot, and it was the perfect length, you didn't drag it out at all, timing was great.

awsome chapter but i dont see where she bonded with him

i love it! very dramatic...
you either mate with him...or leave him!
oh gee i wonder what videl is going to do?
cant wait to 'find out'! update soon!

Hey,
I dont think I read and reviewed this yet..
but anyways.. good stuff as usual... can't wait for the next chapter!
xox Ash xox

wow this is really exciting please update

this story is really good and has a kind of original interesting twist. keep up the good work

update soon plz! i hope it doesn't take you too long like before.

Hey! Wow, this was quite a short chapter. PLease update. And you were right! You do update after several months. But please don't drop the story. I want to know what happens next.

VERY GOOD CHAPTER I CANT WAIT TO SEE IF SHE SAYS YES AND MATES WITH HIM

hey hey hey
this is a great story
I passed it a few times and the summary didn't entice me

but I was bored and decided to give it a chance
I'm glad I did
It's really good
I like it alot

a fan