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| Chosen7 2007-08-05 ch 1,  | abusevery enjoyable, but at times difficult to keep up with what was happening. Seemed as though could have used a little explanation of what transpired at the end and where were they now, romantically speaking. |
| epalladino 2006-03-30 ch 1, | abuseI just loved this. It was so well-written and romantic. And I love how you use the characters. Beth Palladino |
| Terry L. Gardner 2005-11-27 ch 1, | abuseYour stories just get better and better! I love your style of writing and I especially love the fact that you've written such exciting romantic interactions between the Captain and Carolyn without having them actually indulge in sex. It is actually more exciting and wonderful to lead them up to it without giving into their desires and causes the reader to empathise with their mutual longing. It is very sweet. Terry |
| Tani2 2005-02-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhat an incredible story. Romantic and erotic but sophisticated and respectful. AMAZING. |
| xpossibilities 2003-11-18 ch 1, | abuseWhat a fantastic story! I absolutely loved it! Thank you for such an enjoyable read! |
| rosie 2003-11-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseOMG! That was one of the best stories I've ever read! You brought such great depth to the characters - wow! Loved the 'link' too - very cool. Beautifully written and such a pleasure to read! I'd love to see a sequel - basically, I just want MORE! :-) Awesome fic! Excellent! |
| CottageGhost 2003-11-17 ch 1, | abuseSpeaking of reading minds -- were you reading mine? I was thinking just last week how wonderful it would be if you posted this one here, and there it is! What a fabulous story -- you fill in the blanks beautifully and manage to go deeper into what was shown, making the characters and the relationships even richer. Thank you so very much for sharing this fantastic story! Chantal |