Unique, logical (of sorts), and a fun read. *applause*

nice...*smiles sadly* we all feel that way...about all our muses, favorite charactars, and even the ones we ourselves created...you expressed that beautifully...and even though i don't want to admit it, you're right...

*turns away whistling phantom of the opera*

really good

odd but cool ^^

That was certainly original and creative I enjoy your writing style and tone. Great job.

This is absolutely AMAZING! ^^ I printed it out and made my friends at school read it. They agreed with me that it was good. Have you considered making one under another category such as Lord of the Rings, Gundam Wing, or any other?

Wow...
I really liked this fic. After reading it, I must say that I now have a new perspective on the Fanfiction world...the way you write makes the reader understand what is going on in the story and actually feel what you feel. This is a good thing...a really good thing.
You've got some grammatical errors here and there but it does not hinder the reading.
I would like for this to continue since you are obviously a good writer, but I believe it is best for this fic to be kept simple and neat. With chapters, it gets too complex and confusing which is not what we, the readers, want.
I hope you have a happy year.
DHASN

COOL!I like this

interesting...

I think this is a very good piece of work! Well done!
I believe you should keep it as a one-shot because it has all the affect on people you're going to need.
It certainly opened my eyes and I don't think I'll ever look at this site in quite the same way again.
Thank you.
:)

This is interesting. An unusual but intriguing concept -- I'd never even thought of the fandom being interpreted like that. It's well written, in a sort of vague, freeform style that's pretty much like the world you're describing, & I found it interesting that Yami Yugi & Bakura were aware of the narrator, & that Yami Yugi was protective of his other self. Cool stuff.

This is simply beautiful, quite a summary of what most of us authoresses are. At least, the more obsessed ones! >:D

this was good,man,I've never thought of it as forceing them to do something,it's kinda sad. I think you should contiue it,you've inpired me!

Ah, very deep my "friend". "Friend" is an odd word, isn't it? You can find yourself calling someone that you don't even know your so-called-"friend", but you still call him/her that. Sorry about the whole "speaking in riddles" thing, but I am a very secretive person, like you are with your writing; you speak with riddled which some people can't comprehend. I'm rather psychotic, ne? Well, I would feel more than happy if anyone called my "just" that. I think too much for my own good and yet don't think at all. Not on reality at least, the discusting, trivial thing. **quotes you** "Life is a **", I have to remember that one. Thanks, Kaitourei, thanks for the inspiration. I owe you one.

"Reality sucks, it's a **, and that's why I hate it. The damn **."

~*~*~*~*~Kuriku-chan~*~*~*~*~