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| Banana Rum 2005-01-10 ch 2,  | abuseHmm, that was a good beginning. All your characters seemed very in character, especially Kikyo. She's a very hard character to write, and you did it perfectly!! Kiyomi |
| joey 2004-10-07 ch 2, anon. | abuseThis is a good start will you be updating soon? |
| inumiki 2004-07-31 ch 2, | abuseO poor Inuyasha, you gotta feel sorry for him. All he wanted was the Shikon Jewel. I wanna read more! ^.^ |
| Oni No Yami 2004-05-23 ch 2, | abuseHi, hi... Again! ^-^ This story waz good too but I don't like Kagome. Kikio is my friend, though. I think that's who Inu Yasha should choose because Kagome is just a selfish brat & @ least Kikio is more twards his age!! It's really good, though. Update son!! |
| InuYashazKagome 2004-05-06 ch 2, | abuseHey, thanx for reviewing my story. Now uhm, to get down to business, this story is really good, only you mispelled Kikyo in the summary. But besides that, it's great ^^ Update when you have a chance. InuYashazKagome |
| Zizu 2004-02-03 ch 2, anon. | abuseNot long enough . 1st chapter was very confusing. Im sure u can do beta. Talk to someone who understands about punctuation. Try to set it out clearer. Work on your character relations, not rlly realistic, Im sure the next chapter will be interesting. |
| ~*~Phoenix147~*~ 2004-01-20 ch 2, anon. | abuseHeh i know i've told you this over e-mail but this is a cool fic, continue to write it please!? I'm begging you here! Please!? |
| tears of an angel 2004-01-14 ch 2, | abusegreat fic, love it ^^ Plz update! |
| Naru the Miko 2004-01-12 ch 2, | abuseI like your story. :D Do you really think i should go on with mine? But Maybe you could make your chapters longer. Its very good...but needs to be longer. I will go on with my story if i can get more reviewers. Write more soon. |
| Kazumi 2003-12-04 ch 1, | abuseThanx lottie- ok i know Claire can teach you the proper pronunciations far better than i can but i felt like putting that. oh and thanx so much for the reviews everybody- i really appriciate it!:) |
| lottie11 2003-12-04 ch 1, | abusethx 4 the v. much for the tres tres interesante prologue and im sure it will be a good story. |
| claire1308 2003-12-04 ch 1, | abusevery nice |
| lottie11 2003-12-04 ch 2, | abusehey, I love the story and I ALREADY KNOW THE PRONOUNCIATIONS. I just don't know how 2 spell them. |
| jammies2000 2003-12-01 ch 2, | abuseGood start now I am curious what happened to Kagome? You have got to continue this please. Update soon! |
| miaow227 2003-11-18 ch 1, | abuseI honestly tried to understand this, but after the first two paragraphs I got a bit lost. I'm telling you, it's the names. Sorry but you know that I have a massive headache and may not come to school tomorrow (oh wait you'll be reading this at school won't you?). A lot of information though, and good-looking paragraphs which is the basis for any good fic (along with the plot, the characterization...) Sorry again but I think I've done pretty well so far considering I know about Conan which is not even in my sacred English language. See you (hopefully) soon. Btw anyone who actually reads reviews please go to my Takari (Digimon) site at: w.takari.blogspot.com It's more than just an ordinary blog. Trust me here. |