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| James6 2004-01-10 ch 3,  | abusebrief, but sweet (No pun intended). I say again that you capture their personalities very well indeed. You have a good style, so keep it up. |
| James6 2003-12-08 ch 2, | abuseI said before you have skill. Now I KNOW you have skill. Sora's thoughts are deep and involved, with an intimate understanding of her emotions (I'm not saying anything dirty there!). You clearly have a great talent. I hope you decide to write more stories. Please read some more of mine, tell me what you think. Keep up the good work. |
| James6 2003-12-08 ch 1, | abuseThis is very impressive. You've captured Joe's persona very well. I can almost hear his voice while I'm reading. You clearly have skill. I'll read the next chapter now. PS, I've been to Ireland before. I definitely enjoyed it, but it was only a brief visit (a single weekend). |
| Reiko 2003-11-29 ch 1, anon. | abusei like your story and i think jyou and mimi go together great despite what some foolish people think . please continue |
| Rainbow Daydreamer 2003-11-28 ch 1, | abuseHey! I came across one of your fics by chance! This is good, and very intriguing. Please update it soon. (I dropped in on your website btw. It's great but why did you call it what you called it? Maybe you can put something up to explain.) Keep writing... RD |
| Savoan Locc 2003-11-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseI don't want to say this but jyoumi succs cuz really! Koumi loc fan for Life cuz you Koumi haters can't fade me. And you Koumi haters rest in ** cuz its Koumi, Sorato, Takai, and Kenyako loc fan for Life cuz!. |