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| Jill Cohen 2007-12-18 ch 4, anon. | abuseHi there! it´s me again! please continue this!! please! |
| tgmoxie 2007-01-21 ch 4,  | abuseYou really have a gift of togetherness and the shared awkwardness they feel. I like the "trick" he used on her, very nice. You captured the moment of two people, flawed and real, experiencing their first intimate moment together. |
| RobertaAnn 2005-01-29 ch 3, | abuseI have enjoyed reading all of your Terminator fanfiction, but especially this one. Keep on writing, we are out here reading! |
| stormy_seas 2005-01-02 ch 3, anon. | abuseI loved T3, primarily b/c of John and Kate, so I very much appreciate fics that focus on them and their time in the shelter -- especially when they are as well-written as yours. You have a strong command of the characters' voices, and so their dialogue and thoughts are believable and realistic. The detail in your writing is wonderful. Love the chapter titles. And I agree with Kate; John's letter was absolutely beautiful. Thank you for posting this story. I am eagerly awaiting more. |
| Sanssong 2004-12-19 ch 3, | abuseI really like this story, you seem to have the character voices down, which for me is a must for reading fanfiction. I also wanted to have the 'after the bombs fell' story written and toyed with writing one myself, but other fandoms got in the way. I'm so glad someone else did it! I'm looking forward to reading more, here's hoping you post soon! Thanks for sharing ;-) Suzanne |
| The Good Girl 2004-12-13 ch 3, | abusereally good you should update soon!! |
| Callioope 2004-11-29 ch 3, | abuseI should be reading the Canterbury Tales... but this is far more interesting. (Consider that a compliment! ^^; ) "But even the great John Connor held within himself a pocket of cowardice, and so he was writing a letter." Teehee! ^_^;; I love the way their relationship is developing. They're so cute together. |
| Callioope 2004-06-22 ch 2, | abusePlease keep writing this! It's really good! |
| binapez 2004-02-09 ch 2, anon. | abuseWaiting for more story...Please. Bina:-) |
| hammergal 2004-01-16 ch 2, | abuseso glad you updated! Liking this story, keep going! hammergal |
| bina 2004-01-16 ch 2, anon. | abuseYeah! You're back! I love this story and I hope you continue to develope Kate and John's relationship. The "green sparkly unicorn shirt" was so adorable :-) More, More...please :-) Bina:-) |
| GeorgieQ 2003-11-26 ch 1, | abuseThat was the best! PLEASE update like NOW! |
| DarkAngelB 2003-11-23 ch 1, | abuseOh that was such a good prologue! You caughht my interest with this chapter. You hooked me in! Okay right...I need to get a life...Anyways I'm trying to say that I can't wait till the next chapter comes out! |
| bina 2003-11-21 ch 1, anon. | abuse" .How fair was it to have the eyes of the future upon you when pretty much all you were trying to do was ask someone to go steady?" LOL! I love that line. You have a good thing going here. You've succeeding in expressing the growing tension between our two favorite characters. I would love to read how continue to develop John and Kate and their growing relationship. Please write more soon. Sincerely, Bina:-) |
| hammergal 2003-11-18 ch 1, | abuseI like this one. I've enjoyed all your stories, you write very well. All my stories are about John and Kate's relationship, too, please let me know what you think of them. Please continue this story, it's fun to read how other writers see their relationship in the bunker. hammergal |