::Sighs:: You really do a lovely job of making my Muses go crazy, don't you? Mothering Muse (my inner Molly Weasley), is yelling at Analyzing Muse and Slash Muse, cause they got in a fist fight over whether this was slash or not. And Analyzing Muse and Slash Muse are bickering about whose fault the fight was, and the other Muses are just egging them on, and Angst Muse is sitting in the corner and humming to herself, cause this one-shot made her happy.

And none of them have any time to come up with anything pertinent to say in this review. ::Sighs::

that was so cool, so ...self explanitory. so harry got hit with a curse that ended up killing him. i love the way you made snape and harry close. good job!

i truly enjoyed reading that, thank you for sharing.

wow, what a piece. At times near the end it was a little hard to follow who was saying what, but that did not take away too much from the overall piece. Thank you very much it was a great read!
more please, maybe a back piece of it?

i liked how u set up the dialogue, with Harry reading Severus' mind. Nicely done.

This was nothing short of beautiful. Their bickering was so lighthearted, yet mournful for something they both wish had spite. I love this even more than your other work, in some ways, but they are both gorgeous. Wonderful work, I mean it.
-evelia

This is a hard story to write a review for. It is certainly well written, and whether you like first person or not, at least you're good at it. (So many people drift in and out of it, or make the dialogue sound forced - on this site, first person usually = hard to read.) Good work! Hope you'll check out my fic, too.

It was beautiful.
Thank you.
Enahma

Excellent. There's just something in your word choice, made it hard to stop even though I have some 15 pages of Spanish homework to complete. ;)