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| Terry L. Gardner 2006-01-23 ch 1, | abuseVery nice with a little spice! |
| xpossibilities 2003-11-18 ch 1, | abuseExcellent! Loved all the intimate details you added to the Pilot. Very satisfying. Thanks for posting! |
| Melchy 2003-11-18 ch 1, | abuseI love this story! I love the way you show insight into both characters, getting into their minds and showing what is in their hearts. Thank you so much! |
| CottageGhost 2003-11-18 ch 1, | abuseWOW!You did an amazing job of extrapolating from just about everything that was in the pilot! I love the way you get inside the characters' skin and make them reveal themselves. This could easily have been the second episode of the series -- seriously. Thanks for a fantastic read! Chantal |
| Helena Russel 2003-11-18 ch 1, | abuseThanks for this great sequel to the Pilot episode, Susan. I enjoyed reading it. Anne |