"Heaven help them all, since the Ancient was otherwise occupied…

…with her tail apparently."

LOL best lines EVER!
beautiful work ;)

I love how you created this story, the Ancient is amusing.

Suggestions: Odin should be sorcerer, and go off on an adventure to find a teacher, or a convenient white mage should arrive at the forest and coneniently run into Odin ;) Leia will be, as is obvious, the Ancient, so I'm thinking her future is obvious...And Layton will be a powerful...bearer? or some such, and the heir for Heero...So, like, if you ever do make a third, it should be with the newer generation? Though I guess that makes it more of an origional than anything, despite the casting for the parents.

Other then that *cough* I bet Leia really does look good in a tail ;)

And the situation with Gee might have hit home just a little more if we had, had access to memories from Duo when he was younger, and interaction with his not-so-hot tribe (though with Zechs and Wuffie now in control, that tribe is in for a major rehaul! ;)

HAHA! Baby torture! Cooing, baby talk! I think Leia now has my respect and sympathy...being subjected to that kind of attention, how utterly horrifying ;)

Regardless of you continueing or not, what I've read has been enjoyable to the max and an memorable experience. Because it's not all that often, I get an mpreg with plot, little to no cliche, and where the two aren't boinking each other at the beginning, middle, and end of every single chapter they aren't angsting in. You rock.

I couldn't resist commenting here (alas I have no FF account).

First) I love this story. It is one of the awsomest mpregs of it's kind. (not to mention 1=2 is my otp ;)

Second) It has inspired in me, a story background of similar qualities in as much as it is a race of one gender (forgive me? It was just too good a inspiration in the middle of writers block to pass up - and I don't plan on posting it anywhere) and from the end of your first book, or whatever, of this series...I wanted to have twins, but I always hate making twins in mpregs because it seems like that is the ONLY option for them...So I lighted upon the brilliant idea of having one of the twins not be exactly 'human' or of the race...And lo and behold, I read this chapter, and choke on my noodles! Apparently great minds think alike, eh? lol

Third) I am so effing happy Duo is back. Really. I cannot put it into words. I was so totally devided as an author and reader at the same time...in wanting Duo and his braid back, or leaving Heero with Kieran for the sake of poetic romantic nonsense. Now that we have him back? I'm ecstatic. You are such an amazing writer.

This is awesome!
I hope you continue to write for the GW fandom...
~Emma
ps: the prequel was just as awesome, if not awesomer...
You could be a realy author...

i loved this story oh my god i thought duo wud be keiran foreva but we cudnt have that not with the kiddies n i had a suspicion the ancient wud be one of duo n heero's children

YAY! It was so good! I loved it! I kept smiling and laughing! I was reading during English...Im supose to be doing an essay but this is much more interesting than Englsih! I loved this fic! It was so suspenseful and unpredictable! Its been fun! Thank you! ::big huggles!!::

Oh, that was rich! A nice combination of the two minds with that last statement, heavily balenced with a large dose of humor. The all mighty and powerful Ancient . . . is playing with her tail. *snort* There goes any respect, right out the window.

Wow that was really wonderful!! I am SO sorry that I just sort of disappeared on you. I've just sort of vanished off the face of the earth, but I'm trying to come back. Anyways, great fic and I'm SO sorry for the late review.

Beautiful and fun fic. Congratulations.

Aww, you write kids so well that it would be wonderful if they would be more grown up when you wrote again...like three years old for Leia and Layton, which would be eight for Odin I think...as for something to happen...well, you focused a lot on Duo's problems with family and it makes it seem like Heero had an easy ascension and everyone loves him. What if he has an enemy and Duo is the one to suffer without Heero or something like that...it would also be interesting if heero had their next kid.

Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: August 21, 2005 13:05 CDT
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Sorry this is the best I can do for a review...not much time to read ,Never mind write .You see my Mom is in the hospital and I'm reading inbetween visits to her.But I wanted to let you know I'm readng your storyies and enjoying them.If you get this same review for a different story or for the same story, I"m Sorry, it's because I'm just in a hurry ... So Please keep updating and I'll keep reading ...

Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: August 21, 2005 13:05 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Sorry this is the best I can do for a review...not much time to read ,Never mind write .You see my Mom is in the hospital and I'm reading inbetween visits to her.But I wanted to let you know I'm readng your storyies and enjoying them.If you get this same review for a different story or for the same story, I"m Sorry, it's because I'm just in a hurry ... So Please keep updating and I'll keep reading ...

Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: August 21, 2005 13:05 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Sorry this is the best I can do for a review...not much time to read ,Never mind write .You see my Mom is in the hospital and I'm reading inbetween visits to her.But I wanted to let you know I'm readng your storyies and enjoying them.If you get this same review for a different story or for the same story, I"m Sorry, it's because I'm just in a hurry ... So Please keep updating and I'll keep reading ...

Yay! My internet works! Yay for updating! *glomps*

Did you ever know that you're my Heero (ehehe)
You're everything I would like to be.
I can fly higher than an eagle
'cause you are the wind beneath my wings