Beautiful, absolutely beautiful. How sad, my heart breaks for Smith and Mi. It's not fair, it's not fair! Very good work.
All the best,
C.

I loved it! The path Agent Smith took to enlightenment was well crafted and showed a depht i didnt expect to see. BRAVO! Youre slow revealing to the reader of Agents Smiths growing humanity, was well thought out and not one two three, it was as much a surprise to me as it was to him! I cried at the end! I cried! I felt the strength of smiths love for Mi and the crushing blow of her loss, Thank you for gifting me with a vision of Agent Smith, i didnt think i'd see! please dobt change a thing.

Tragic yet beautiful. It was really bittersweet and I really liked it. Good job!

Really enjoyed this story! And that it was a finished work! Well done! Looking forward to reading more of your stuff!

I am re-reading your story again, Chelle. This is one hell of a job. But I think you shouldn't do a sequel. eave it here - it's far too beautiful.
Love,
Selina

Great work, really great quality writing. *sniff* but its not good for a smith fan to read the day after she sees revolutions. >_< Oh well. great story though ^_^ and dont mind that sound, it's just me and my anderson voodoo doll ^_^
LaurenK AKA deranged smith fan

brilliant story!! one of the best ive read! :D *claps*

Aw... the tragedy part had to come didn't it! *sniff* Tragic but shiny. Thank you for writing this.

Beautiful. Abssolutely beautiful.

"...I can feel you." Really powerful. I'm really enjoying this story... more, please!

I am gettig a really wild graphic image while I'me reading this.

'And Smith leaned in to meet her lips in the sweetest kiss that the Matrix had ever witnessed.'

Ahh - this is so good.

Olá,
S

e! I almost cried last chapter because I thought he was gonna die by the person he loved!

I love this fic! The last line in this chapter was so perfect... please continue, unless this was the last chapter?

Very shiny fic. You know he didn't take his glasses off at all in Reloaded, and only twice in Revs - when he took over the Oracle and when they were knocked off at the end. Very symbolic. I'm glad they both took them off here. Powerful stuff.

*Selina squeals in delight*

Taking my breath away...