I loved your other stories and this is fine, but it's like cake without the frosting.
Logan without Max is just not the same. You write M/L so well, you're right up there with Star24 and Peking Noodle. Finish this one up and get to work on the cake and frosting.

Why are your chapters so short? Not that I don't like you story, it is just that I need longer chapters. I'll be here waiting for more.

While I'm not saying I need a Denise N Rodier 67 page epic chapter, I will say THAT WAS TOO SHORT! Gees...you're supposed to be breaking the drought, not teasing the dying man with water!!
Now that that's out of my system...well done, boo. I'm enjoying. Post again soon.

Right...so the AN is longer than the chapter? I feel so cheated! Get to the action, already.

Interesting take on a story you've started here. Started being the operatvie phrase. I've often wondered what was going on in the days leading up to the Sonrisa incident. Can't wait to see where the story takes us on this one.

I can only second Kasman here. :-)

Great start to what I'm sure it is going to be a great story. It doen't need to have Max in it to be good. Hurry up and write more.

You call that a chapter?
Ten words doesn't make a chapter. :p Nope, not good enough at all. Very disappointing. I'm talking about the length of course, not the content, which, although brief, is (I'm sure) a great start to wonderful things. Just stop with the teasing! Move it along already! ;)
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Oh no. I got so excited when I saw your name because I love your writing. But now you say NO Max.

What a shame for me and other shippers who need all the Max and Logan we can get. Some guy is writing a long story about Logan and it's all boring without Max. I stopped reading it. Something about steel I think.

Oh well, you'll write about Max and Logan in the future I'm sure.

Nice set up chapter, but I'm an addict, and like most addicts I need more.