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PaintedAme
2006-02-18 . chapter 1
Wow. I've a number of different reasons for Kagome's dad's absence but I don't think I ever heard that one before. By the end of it I was close to tears.
Thank you for taking time out of your life to write this story.
SIH =^-^=
Un4given Miko
2005-09-28 . chapter 1
wow... That was great, I really liked the end so cute!
Crystal Twilight
2005-06-22 . chapter 1
Oh... Sad! Poor Kagome... Well-written. Enjoyed it.
Selenity Jade
2005-05-29 . chapter 1
That was sweet. A wee bit OOC but that's alright. ^_^
sakicupsho
2005-02-13 . chapter 1
i like ur story alot but...i never noticed it but every1s fathers died...no one has any parental control exept 4 kagome...and her mom is only in her time! the have no gaurdians...xept 4 shippo cause hes the"innocent" 1...he keeps them from doing..."stuff"...i love ur story tho!! good job!! *pats computer on the back...*
Dark Inu Fan
2004-08-30 . chapter 1
that was a good one-shot. the song really tied into it. good job and good luck with your other stories. dark
silentmiko242
2004-08-19 . chapter 1
::sniffs::

Very sweet and emotional. The lack of Kagome's father leaves the world open for where he is.

Miko-chan
Mrryl-Lord of Shaded Dreams
2004-06-09 . chapter 1
Hm... yep, makes sense. I liked this one! Nice and fluffy at the end. It was... accurate, stuff like that does happen alot. Sadly. SO yeah, I found this a good story of the lack of a father.
--MRRYL
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Saki3
2004-02-28 . chapter 1
Aw, how cute. Very sweet! I liked it.
There was one line somewhere that said "Since Inuyasha’s father was already dead though," and the "though" sounds very out of place. I would suggest cutting it out and leaving it like that, or you could tack on a "However" or a "But" onto the beginning instead of it. Just a suggestion.
I liked the use of the (very good) song. I can't write songfics b/c I can never figure out where I should stick in the song lyrics -_- Good job!
maruimochi
2004-02-17 . chapter 1
So cute! I loved the story! I wish that Kagome's father was nice and died in an accident rather than being abusive. But since the series doesn't talk about him, who knows?
K Nighthawk
2004-02-17 . chapter 1
Coming from someone who's been there, I know how hard it is to say what happened to people who should've been there in your life. Thank you for writing this.
Lauraena (too lazy to log in)
2004-01-27 . chapter 1
*tears* Darn you for making me cry! Great songfic though, i usually dont like them, but this one was good, i LOVE savage garden, really great band! Keep up the good writing!
Litwolf
2004-01-18 . chapter 1
*talking as tears slip down cheeks* that was so sweet and so sad... I loved it!
Talyn Gray
2003-11-29 . chapter 1
^_^ it was good! But it seemed when Kagome was saying what was happening, it was more like she was reading... It was a bit too descriptive when she spoke... ^_^ I never thought I'd ever say: 'It's too descriptive' lol... ^_^
anyway, good work!
KPA>ania
2003-11-24 . chapter 1
that was so sweet!
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