|Reviews for BA Season 2: 23 to 26 'Retribution'|
| Carlalalita 11/7/08 . chapter 4
Another awesome epic!
| MissGuided 9/11/08 . chapter 4
Glad Shadow made up his mind and I do think they make an adorable couple ... though it felt a bit forced in my opinion.
| Mily 3/23/05 . chapter 4
Ah, great ending! It totally made up for the angst! _ Excellent story.
| Mily 3/23/05 . chapter 3
Why did they have to die? It was so sad I cried and I had no idea who they were... ;
| Lady1Venus 3/24/02 . chapter 4
From what you said to me earlier, about this part I decided to read and other than the attempted rape, and the death of the clones it was really good. You did a good though with both disturbing scenes. I'm not much for tear jerkers but it was good. Nicely laid out. I especially like Goliath's anger on Thailog. Too bad though he didn't live and learn to not touch Goliath's family, to actually fear Goliath. I've only seen humans fear Goliath not Gargoyles. Good work.
| Brian McCrary 4/11/01 . chapter 4
A four-kleenex story. Great stuff!
| The Barracuda 1/17/01 . chapter 1
To: "Me" Yes, Goliath can weigh 700 hundred pounds. I checked this against animals in the world, and found that even siberian tigers can weigh up to 800 pounds, and still they're smaller than Goliath. He's 7 feet, 7 inches, with pure muscle, and plus wings and a tail, it is very conceivable that Goliath is 700 lbs. (I even considered leaving his weight at 750, but decided to bring it down some for Elisa's sake...)
| Me 1/17/01 . chapter 1
WHOA! And btw, Goliath cannot possibly weigh anywhere near 700 lbs. Maybe when he is in stone form but not when he's flesh. I think he'd probably be around 400 lbs, but "700 lbs" is plain outrageous.
| Malkavien 1/11/01 . chapter 1
*stands up and applauds* That was truly beautiful, dude. I felt my throat tightened, by reading this story. I could really relate to Delilah, there, for the loss of a dear friend.
Great character developpement on Shadow and Delilah, here.
As I was reading the passage of Song Of The Souls, I was listening to Nightwish's song "Two For Tragedy" (5th track on their 'Wishmaster' album). It fit so well with the situation!
I hoped that Demona would have been there for her daughter, though. Well, that'll perhaps be in upcoming episodes. What's on the slate, now that the Retribution arc is done, btw?
Can't wait for #27! I'm really starting weekends, now, because it means that I have to wait for the monday to be able to read a new Beginning Anew episode!
anyway, enough with that big review! till next time!
| Dara 1/11/01 . chapter 1
That was sweet. More.
| Jozzy 1/11/01 . chapter 1
Amazing. I loved your description of the moon from the nursery window. The scene between Shadow and Delilah was beautiful. Write more.
| hellraiser the phantom flamer 1/11/01 . chapter 1
Loved the stories dude. Read them alland hope you keep cranking them out. Keep up the excellent work.
| Caramia 1/10/01 . chapter 1
Good storry. If I were more articulate at the moment I could say many great things about your story, but I'm not so get over yourself. Just kidding.
Keep it up!
| I Kill Trees 1/8/01 . chapter 1
Wow! I must read the next part. Please have it up soon. Sorry, can't think of anything else excpt wow. Must have more story.
| Blackheart 1/8/01 . chapter 1
I loved it