|Reviews for Just A Little|
| PrayerGirl 9/2/09 . chapter 1
| PinkCamellia 8/8/07 . chapter 1
Aw, that was cute.
I much like the repitition at the end of each verse. Very nice job.
| plainwhitelie 9/30/06 . chapter 1
iT WAS CUTE!
| obssesed-fic-fan 10/10/05 . chapter 1
I like it but the last one makes the whole thing seem so sad that one is mean*pouts*
| Ilvinaeda 1/28/05 . chapter 1
Hey, it wasn't that bad...just need to watch the quotes. If it's a poem, you don't need to quote your phrases, make it into phrases. Like for example:
Inuyasha always yells at us,
Telling us to hurry along.
And I ask myself, wondering,
If I am truly that helpless...
Just a little, I tell myself...
Just a little...
I guess you could say I think the quotes make it feel almost like it was supposed to be part of a short (or really short) story, instead of part of a poem. By eliminating quotes, it has a little more "personal" feel, to me. Try it, and if you don't like it, you can just ignore it, but I think it makes poetry that much deeper.
Overall, the theme and the idea stick, just lose the quotes! _ A good one overall!
| Tears of Eternal Darkness 11/14/04 . chapter 1
didn't suck ATALL!
wierd? yes. bad? HECK no! good? most deffinatly!
| WhiteTigerLilly 10/7/04 . chapter 1
Aw! that was so cute Sniffles I love your writing, its the best
| Jazzy Uchiha 10/4/04 . chapter 1
i liked it
| Werewolves are People Too 8/15/04 . chapter 1
o, i dont think it's weird. i think you should make like a long story out of it, you know? Sango's POV. i like it!
| Yura of the demon hair 5/9/04 . chapter 1
It was ok. better than some other things i've read.
| I am Sango 3/29/04 . chapter 1
Aww... that was sad. You could tell that her mood changing from mainly happy, to so sad in the end. I liked this poem! It's so sad and cute! Jaa bai bai!
the demon exterminator, Sango
| ReverberatingSilence 2/13/04 . chapter 1
i must say it wasnt one of ur best writing, but yet it was still good, nice ending. i like endings like dat.
| Death Scythe X-9 1/27/04 . chapter 1
It was pretty bad. It made a little sense i guess. I love how Miroku is like a pimp in the show. It's hilarious. He tries to touch Sango's butt and she like slaps the crap outta him.
Question:If you could answer me please?
How long does it take for an update to be posted.
| Kawaiidustbunny 1/19/04 . chapter 1
That was so sad! Stupid Miroku! You should make miroku the one sad! It is his own fault! I hope you continue to write poetry!
| Dark Nightmares 12/30/03 . chapter 1
bad? nonononononono! that was not bad, it was very good! described Sangos POV greatly