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| FirePhoenix86 2008-08-27 ch 34, | abuseWow, i just love your writing style! i like stories that place Severus in good light and keeping him in character. I was suprised at the Vampire Snape thing, but it worked. Very good humor and tense parts. I like how you were able to drag out the vampire mystery for so long. And you even were able to bring back Sirius! Yay! Great story, i loved it and it is now on my fave lists. |
| Amanda 2008-07-18 ch 24, anon. | abuseOK so I found this story recently and I read it when I can't sleep at night. Just read chapter 23 "The Roadtrip" and nearly died. I am not kidding--I laughed so hard I thought that I was going to hyperventilate. It was flipping hilarious, and the best part was that I could totally picture every excruciating, insanely funny moment because all of the characters were so IN character. Great writing all the way through, by the way. I am loving this series! |
| Katalara 2008-06-27 ch 34, | abuseI absolutely LOVED this story. What an unusual final battle! And such an awesome loophole to bring back Sirius... Very cool! =^..^= |
| i so want 2 b magic 2008-06-17 ch 34, | abuseAnother truly brilliant story, i loved every minute. I was going to say somthing else then but I've forgotten, never mind. you're a fantastic author and I look forward to reading more of your work. I read the first part of this story on potions and snitches and about half way through I was already hoping that there was a sequal and went looking to see if there was one, and here it is, just as good if not better than the first. love sneezy by the way but i think i liked him better before i found out that he was really Tim. I would love an opsittop for a pet, they seem really cute. Anyway, thankyou for writing such a wonderful story that kept me interested and wanting to read more everytime i hit the bottom of the page (i still want to read more you know - you should write a one-shot or something for a longer version of that christmas scene!) I so want 2 b magic (kirsten) |
| etherian 2008-05-06 ch 34, | abuseI'd stand up and applaud, if I could. Completely brilliant story and I just really enjoyed it. You did a beautiful job! |
| BrokenSkye 2008-03-10 ch 34, | abuseI absolutely love both these fics - though I have to say that the kidnapping of the Dursleys (the manner, not the actual idea) was a bit "far out", to keep with the termonology that Dumbledore seemed to be going for. In fact, the whole scene seemed kind of "trippish". However, that didn't detract from the overall enjoyment of the fic. And I also noticed in your revised author note/ indtroduction of the first fic, that you had mentioned that you were writing a third in the series - I can't wait for you to post it. However, I'm a bit apprehensive that it's stuck in the pergatory of WIP's since it's been about 4 years... If you aren't going to finish/post the last book, it would be great if you could tell us (your millions of rabid fans that are all waiting with baited breath for book 3) so we don't die of suspense. Possibly a note in your bio on your page? Anyway, I realise that this is a kind of long review, so I'll just shout out a "Well done, and keep up the good work!" |
| Ginnylove9990 2008-02-27 ch 1, | abuseGreat Story. I love it. Keep up the good work. |
| Writeurlife 2008-02-23 ch 34, | abusevery solid ending... i have read this story, and its prequel, all this week... bit of an obsession, really, but i absolutely loved it. |
| Writeurlife 2008-02-22 ch 6, | abusewhy wouldn't gringotts let them in w/out an adult if they're of age? |
| Writeurlife 2008-02-21 ch 2, | abuseyou should put this on potions and snitches like the first one... It's really rather good, 2 chapters in, but i knew it would be. you're a very good writer, you know... and now, time for bed. :) |
| FoxxNyara 2007-12-15 ch 34, | abuseI've just a had a marathon reading session over the last two days, in which I read this story and it's prequel. I've really enjoyed both of them, I like the interaction of characters, you've departed from canon more times than I can count, but I believe that almost everything that is done and said can be linked back to it with a very logical progression. I hope you write more. Lots more. |
| Tomac 2007-11-02 ch 34, anon. | abuseYou really aren't all that bad, and thank you for a wonderful story. Tomac |
| piwqefjk 2007-10-10 ch 34, | abuseThis is a gorgeous ending - I love the way Harry wound up taeching Potions XD |
| piwqefjk 2007-10-10 ch 30, | abuseThis chapter was brilliant - I love the way Sirius has come back, and the way you show the joy of everyone xD |
| PerchancetoDream87 2007-09-10 ch 34, | abuseI read this story after finishing its prequel and I just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed them. You write wonderfully, had a great plot, and it was just awesome to read. Many nights I stayed up way too late reading these two stories haha. I saw hat everything was in 05, so I don't know if you even get on anymore, but I sincerely hope you write more soon! |