what's with the WITSEC? it should be WPP for witness protection program or just say witness protection. over than that, great story i love it

Now that she is alex again. i think you should start writing "alex said" instead of "lara" cuz you do in some parts then you switch back. other than that. ITS ALL GOOD

Wow very interesting story! So what does Cragen want 2 talk 2 her about?

AWW, great story. Please continue.
I wanna know if Alex will get in volved with Capt. Cragen again, or if she will go for Mike.

Again, please continue...I can't wait to read the next part.

Great story. Write more.

Great story. Write more.

Great story. Write more.

Great story. Write more.

Great story. Write more.

Great story. Write more.

You can't stop here! This story is going so great! I can't wait to find out what happens with Alex!

Is she going to start seeing Cragen again? Or will she start seeing someone else, or not date right now?

I am DYING to see Olivia have her babies! Are they going to be girls or boys or both a boy and girl?

Don't keep me in suspense any longer! PLEASE!!

This story is so GREAT! I LOVE ALL the names that you picked for the babies.

I also thought of some other names (in case you need them!)

For girls, I like the names Ashley, Hayley, Jennifer, Natasha, Melissa, and Julie.

For boys I like Zach, Ryan, Mark, Devon, Andrew, Damon, Adam, and Jason.

Wonderful fanfic! Please write more!

OLIVIA'S MARRIED TO ELLIOT & PREGNANT WITH HIS TWINS!!

YIPPE!

Please don't stop! I can't wait to find out what happens next!!

Keep going!!

OMG! Kathy is dead! That's so sad!

I know that on the show, Kathy left Elliot, and I really wish that the writers hadn't done that!

As much as I like the Elliot/Olivia pairing, I like Elliot and Kathy together more. He belongs with his wife and kids. Oh well.

Please continue! I am SO loving this!!

Man, you really like keeping us all in suspense, don't you?

I'm SO HAPPY that Olivia is preggers with twins! But who's their father?

I really hope that Clayton Mills gets the death penalty this time! He should have gotten it the first time around!

Don't stop writing! I LOVE this story! I'm off to Chapter 3!!