I love your story and i hope your sequel comes soon i cant wait to see it. ;D

the end of this chapter, isn't it the beginning of Fire and Ice?

Halle freakin' lujah! :D I'm so happy! Yet sad... it's over and this chapter was so touching... =w= Hope your sequel comes soon ;D

-jumps up and down frantically- YES!! FINALLY! i've been waiting forever for this!

Kopaka and Lehu seeming to be having quite a few 'meetings',

Can't wait for the update!

UPDATED AT LAST! @.@ After all that waiting :grin: I knew you'd update soon enough :D Excellent chapter update soon and I agree with the Jaller's death thing, but Hapka wasn't really as good as Farshtey :cool:

OH! So that's what happened to Tahu you know I just got the funniest though *gigglesnort*

Tahu: *looks around* O_O; Where the karzahni am I? I could've sworn I was in Ta-koro or something

Update soon :D

WAIT ONE LITTLE MOMENT! If that's not Tahu then what happend to him?

Dude, That is SO wrong!
The whole gayish thing with the Tahu/Lewa and Onua/Lewa is just creepy! It's well written but the pairing, ew.
My group of friends have particular attitudes and idiosyncrasies that identify us with one of the six Toa. I am Lewa, as I am on a constant sugar high and like to annoy people with my incessant tree-speak and my best friend, well, has the attitude of Onua. My freind Lavina, who you may have heard of by now, has taunted us with the whole "Green Angel" thing, and it is just wrong. I may not be the best person to get a review from, though, so just disreguard this, just the crazy ramblings of a Bionicle fan.

But... what happened to Tahu... :(

how can this be so interesting when it is so wrong? hey would you consider making one like this but between kopaka and Gali?? now THAT would be an AWESOME story!

wooho lewas back *does her happy dance* i can't wait for the next chapter please write the next chapter soon please

Stop it stop it stop it... who sick and twisted can you be... that is just so wrong! Okay I'm not for Yoai but I'm not against it eather but I still find you story wrong! STOP IT STOP IT STOP IT! AH YOUR SO EVIL! evil Freak! >.

great job with getting the mix toas right...i like to do that with my toa toys. is the scene with makuta a dream,flashback or scene...plese respond at
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When are you going to update this story? I love
Bionicle and Yaoi. A friend of mine emailed me with your story and I loved it. Lewa is so cute when he cry's and I love the paring you did. Lewa is my favorite character in Bionicle and that's why she sent it to me. After she sent it to me I almost passed out when I saw how long It's been since you updated. When are you going to update this story? I hope you haven't given up on it because it's a really great story. Email me ASAP or when you see this message. Maby one of your friends will see this and tell you about it so you can email me. I have included my eamil with my review and I await your reply. Oh one more thing, BIONICLE RULES!

Aw! I love it when Lewa crys. This was the 2nd Bionicle fic I've ever read, the first being the light one. Just thought I'd add that.