Reviews for The Tempestuous Lives of the Virtuous

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Dlbn 2008-08-04 ch 10,	abuseDrunk Inuyasha...amazing. truely amazing. ^_^ Dlbn Your psycho hanyo
brakken 2008-06-01 ch 20,	abuseI feel kind of cheated out of the ending...And here I thought something would actually work, even if it wasn't the way Miroku intended...Oh well it was funny enough anyway-and this was more realistic and keeping with the canon because of that. A fun piece in general.
brakken 2008-06-01 ch 19,	abuseOuchies...poor Inuyasha...I'm almost surprised he isn't cursing more...Nice job making it out that Kagome knew, you had me convinced for a moment there. Inuyasha's reaction to the whole thing is perfectly hilarious. Great job with that.
brakken 2008-06-01 ch 18,	abuseHehehe...I love Miroku's complete cluelessness. You have a real gift for his character, you know that? I feel like he's right there explaining it all to me with that faked innocent expression of his. And the occasional lascivious grin of course. Nice job, can't wait to see what happens next...
brakken 2008-06-01 ch 17,	abuseHm...Not exactly the reaction I expected (I expected Inuyasha to try ripping Miroku's head off)...I guess Inuyasha really is more shy than anything else. Or maybe he's scared of what Kagome might do to him if she found out-that sounds quite reasonable in my opinion. Although she'd probably kill Miroku first. That is, if Sango didn't do manage it earlier, which she would. I guess, yet again, this 'shyness' of Inuyasha's is in the best interests of the group.
brakken 2008-06-01 ch 16,	abuseUhoh...Whatever this is, it can't be good. Well, for Inuyasha I mean. And as this is nearing the end of the story, could I predict that this one will be the last? Whether it works or not...I do hope something works out eventually. I'm kind of losing hope at this point though...Good job making the failures of their relationship into humor, I had no idea that could work.
brakken 2008-06-01 ch 15,	abuseI agree with Miroku. The universe is conspiring against this-and as you've created this universe, I think he should take it up with you. And I don't know where that came from. There just wasn't much to talk about in this chapter I guess. I'll keep reading.
brakken 2008-06-01 ch 14,	abuseThis is one of the best examples of innuendo I've read in a while. Positively delightful for my hentai side, and humorous in every way just thanks to the irony of it all. Fabulous dialog, through and through.
brakken 2008-06-01 ch 13,	abuseGreat description-I can't wait to find out what's really going on though...I wonder if Shippou's right...And I find it endlessly amusing that instead of showing his freakish maturity about such things, he's actually acting the part of the child. And I can just imagine Miroku's smile...I'll keep reading...
brakken 2008-06-01 ch 12,	abuseGreat set up. I can only imagine what the scents of those flowers would do to Inuyasha; if they can affect a human nose, the poor hanyou will have no chance. I can't wait to find out how Miroku explains it to begin with...
brakken 2008-06-01 ch 11,	abuseOohh, I'm chuckling in anticipation. I can't wait to hear what this 'special room' really does look like...Although I can imagine what Miroku would call special...
brakken 2008-06-01 ch 10,	abuseMiroku's partly wrong, partly right. Inuyasha did start ripping her clothes off after all. I find it positively delightful how much that implies and how far those implications are from the truth. And I think you deserve Kudos for coming up with all of these separate scenarios-it takes creativity, a useful thing. Not to mention discretion, choosing the good ideas to write out.
brakken 2008-06-01 ch 9,	abuseOh no-don't tell me Miroku's going to try and get Kagome drunk too...Because something tells me that Inuyasha really would kill him for that. Slowly. Forgot to mention how much I liked that line in an earlier chapter. I can't wait to see what he's concocted this time.
brakken 2008-06-01 ch 8,	abuseNice ending. The dot dot dot is always so delightful when used properly. And I like Miroku's idea about why they bicker so much-I'm not sure if he's right or not, but it's one of the better theories I've heard.
brakken 2008-06-01 ch 7,	abuseI give Miroku commendations for his persistence, and Inuyasha for his stupidity in not realizing what Miroku's up to. Although if he was aware, he'd probably have killed the monk long ago and the story would have to come to a tragic end with the main character deceased...Sigh I guess all logistics cannot be satisfied at once. Real life is apparently too random. Point 1 for the romantics over the enlightenment philosophes. And I really need to stop being such a history buff. Amusing, as always.

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