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| Choas Babe 2008-02-13 ch 1,  | abuseI think that it's hilarious that they keep correcting for each other. Like "Daniel" instead of "Donald" and "Colonel" and "Doctor" instead of "Mister." |
| Zarz 2007-11-11 ch 1, | abuseThis is really, really great! I love this story and its sequels. It would be really fun if you wrote more. I've always loved the idea of Daniel knowing a bit more than his teammates give him credit for. Great work! |
| Shadewolf7 2007-03-07 ch 1, | abuseOh... I like. |
| just lurking 2006-08-19 ch 1, | abusewow. what a great job! Michael Shanks must have known fanfic writers couldn't resist that challenge! |
| Rebel Goddess 2006-03-09 ch 1, | abuseLMAO! Love Ninja-Daniel. MS sounds hysterically funny in real life. More please. This was just fantastic. |
| Padawan Jan-AQ 2005-03-26 ch 1, | abuseNice story. :) I liked it. Thanks. |
| Italian-Goil 2005-03-21 ch 1, | abuseYAY! You're my new favorite author...I love this story! So clever...and actually believable. :o) Very well done. |
| Miriam 2004-11-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis story was really great. It reminded me of the story Bushido. Awsome job. |
| Mara Jade Jedi 2003-11-24 ch 1, | abuseohmygod thats excellent!! great work! |
| Orion9 2003-11-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseMakes you feel like giving Daniel an extra great big long hug for being the special guy that he is. Also loved Jack’s reaction to all this: “Jack shook his head and pointed to the paperwork, turning back to the bored clerk. “Uh... Hello. I’m here for Daniel Jackson? Archaeologist? Scientist?” He let the unspoken ‘geek’ hang in the air.” Haha! Simply priceless! Great job! |
| bailey 2003-11-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseLOL! Great story, could actually see it happening to Daniel as well! Can I be Daniels keeper? Pretty Please:-)! |
| jezowen 2003-11-22 ch 1, | abuseWonderful story that could easily be a Stargate 'slice of life' that never made it to the tv screen. Very enjoyable! |
| Kyra2 2003-11-21 ch 1, | abuse*laughs* Poor Danny, really can't deal with gratitude too well. Never realises how special he is. And he does need a keeper, quite desperately! |
| KariAnn 2003-11-21 ch 1, | abuseWhat are you? A walking knowledge bank? Mythology, geomorphology, and now swords & Aidido. Which Gatecon was this? I am so happy that you left him "Daniel" and not Green Hornet (or should that be Kato). Stories with Daniel as secret hero or more than what meets the eye are just a story, not a fanfic. How can I write a critique when I can find nothing wrong. |
| nefret24 2003-11-21 ch 1, | abuseGreat story!! Intricate, but not interfering plotting, plausible and hilarious-- not to mention very true to the characters themselves. I can perfectly visualize Daniel rushing to a woman's rescue, trained or no, simply on the principle of the thing... ROTFLMAO at Jack's comment "You need a keeper" !! Very well done. Thank you for sharing. |