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fallenangell
2005-11-29
ch 1,
abuseReally cool please write more!
Morgan Stuart
2004-12-13
ch 1,
abuseAnother marvelous story. Your research really shows here: you're mastery of the information and the language makes this seem effortless when I'm sure it is not. The pacing kept this lively and entrancing, and once again, your characters are perfection. I will be rereading this and recommending it to others. You make me miss the series even more than I already did, but you've kept its spirit alive. Great work.
vega rin
2004-01-07
ch 1,
abuseTitillating and tantalizing. The characters and the plotline are perfectly written in the spirit of the show, and it's amazing how much the story captivates and entrances the readers with the words. Sheer brilliance.
lizangel22222
2004-01-04
ch 1, anon.
abusewell... it's definitely original. I was confused at some points with the changing back and forth between scenes--but I blame that on myself, really--I'm too dense for my own good. But all and all, a good read.
Nimitz4
2003-11-23
ch 1,
abuseTres bon mon cher :-) I gotta say that I just loved the Creole - the Brigette and Ghede characters were fantastic to read out loud...kinda like reading the Robert Duvall character in Rambling Rose (ie Daddy) hee hee they just flow into these full-bodied characters, transforming into skin, bone, muscle through the language itself. Terrific sweets!

I have to see the show now - cos the Paul / Evelyn interaction sounds very very interesting LOL and by "very very interesting" I mean hot and sexy hahahahaha

Brilliant standalone - I'm going to be greedy and demand another now LOL! btw I love the way you build scenes, and the change in timeline (backwards forwards backwards forwards - but always well timed and it always contributes successfully to the story and it makes it interesting to read, plus creates this wonderful sense of drama and gives it a good pace.

Your language is wonderful and lyrical - I really like how you've developed your own style sweets, it has a good balance of emotional honesty - like you're feeling the personal revelations that the characters feel. I like how you use plot devices that the reader wants to see (so I'm anticipating it) but it never feels trite or overly scripted...it always feels fresh and real because the style you have is so unique...but you are kind to 'us' your audience and grant us our hearts desires hee hee thankies thankies

Congratulations sweets great story
Niz
ps you've probably got me hooked onto another new show hee hee my video will be forever indebted to you hahahahaa
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