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Tramontana Keeper
2004-02-15 . chapter 4
cool. freaky. great combination w/ muraki, btw. poor aya.
Star of Heaven
2004-02-14 . chapter 8
That ending seemed a little too sudden. But it wasn't bad or anything. It did leave a lot of things open. There does seem to be room for a sequel, but it would also work as it is. I don't mind open endings. They leave most of the interpretations up to the reader. Anyway, I did enjoying reading your fic. Some parts went by too quickly, like Schuldig's "supposed" death scene and when he found out about Farfarello being turned into a monster. But, a lot of scenes were well-written, like Omi's and Muraki's confrontation at Manx's grave. Also, there were some parts with really awkward and clumsy grammar, although overall the fic was pretty readable. There's not much else I need to say, except to keep up the good work.
KyraEnsui
2004-02-09 . chapter 8
I shall try to complete "Euthanasia" soon. Your story has inspired me to continue and revise my work to make it better. I love your story and this has a very nice and intriguing ending too. Never would have suspected.
RuByMoOn17
2004-02-09 . chapter 8
thats cool!write an Aya+shu fic pls!
Koji-chan
2004-02-08 . chapter 8
GREAT FIC ^_^...though I'd like to see how the boys have taken the news of Aya's most likely death. He won't survive? *sob* that's sad!
Ja
Koji-chan
Chris
2004-02-05 . chapter 6
hie
read your excellent fic and really enjoyed it.hope that you have a fab finale planned for all this.keep up the good work!
-Chris-
RuByMoOn17
2004-01-28 . chapter 7
Update!
KyraEnsui
2004-01-27 . chapter 7
o.o! *speechless* I must wait for your next chappie. Hehe.. It's good and suspenseful.
RayM619
2004-01-23 . chapter 6
Aya's Gluhen outfit is made by Muraki? @_@ That will be the day when the pigs start flying! Pretty good for a crossover despite grammar mistakes and other hiccups. The explaination for Muraki's interest is still hanging in the air. Try not to screw it up like Matrix Revolution!
KyraEnsui
2004-01-22 . chapter 6
^__^ I'll be waiting! Whoa~~ What a story. Update more plwease? Hehe..
Female Heero Yuy
2004-01-16 . chapter 5
Another fine chapter of your story. Good job. Now if only you would update more. T.T
KyraEnsui
2004-01-16 . chapter 5
^^ Good as always. Ohh~~ Who? Who? I can't wait for the next chappie!
Koji-chan
2004-01-16 . chapter 5
HHm *pout* end of chap 5...too soon, want more *grin* ^_~! Wow really good...again ^_^! It's really exciting your story, keep it going that way ^_^!
Ja
Koji-chan
meethzoonk
2004-01-08 . chapter 1
Oh hey!!
Those people removed your story? Is that why Purple Eyes disappeared from ff.net? My friend's story was removed too and i think that's really unfair. I doubt the people who own ff.net would read each story on this site so i guess someone probably reported you. Someone *jealous* of your talent, most likely or just someone who thought it was funny to press the 'Report Possible Abuse' button.
Anyway, i'm glad this story is back! I only the first 2 chappies of PE and now i get 2 read 4!!
On to da next chappie..
KyraEnsui
2003-12-21 . chapter 4
wow. it's getting more interesting. ^^ keep it up. yay~~ on my birthday too. coolness.
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