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| Meredith T. Tasaki 2004-10-03 ch 1, | abuseI may have read better things than this, but I can't remember any, and I've been thinking about it for a while. This is how symbolism should be done; it's so subtle, it's not the focus of the story, it's not contrived; only after you're done do you go back and realize all the connections, the deeper possible meanings. Elegant, I'd call this... This makes fanfiction look respectable, and I thank you for that. Someday you've got to do this for a living... |
| AJV 2003-11-23 ch 1, | abuseI usually don't read slash, but I loved this. It is beautifully written, and the imagery is wonderful. Well done! |