Wow, this is like so wonderfully written.

How lachrymose... Deathscenes of Vincent's usually always get to me.. Yet this one swamped them all. Your writings always paint such a vivid picture in my head. Brilliant once again, darling!

-Seraphim your Blue-suited monkey

Wow...that's well written. On my Fav list, even for a one-shot! Er...is it one shot?

Beautiful.

Wow... chillingly realistic. *Shivers* Hojo was perfect and so was poor poor Vincent.

It was a bit sloppy and slow near the end, but as you got into the story, you got better. May I suggest re-writing the beginning with more description or less of what you have now. You can either have it mysterious and fast or poetic and long, but in between just doesn't work.
7/10

I really liked this. It was done well. *huggles Vincent* Poor Vinny-chan! Evil Hojo! >:(

::walks in::

Hi! Oh wow, Season. I absolutely loved this. You have such talent for these pieces. You captured his pain and his own guilt perfectly. And that he'd failed being his last thought, it's no wonder he is so morose in his present day form.

Thank you so much for the dedication!

...Now I shall have to get busy on returning the favor.

I absolutely loved the way you brought his death here. It was hauntingly beautiful.

~Nighty Night~

Amazing. A Truly passionate and accurate reflection on the cryptic messages from Lucrecia's cave. Gold star.

Well, now *I* learned a thing or two about a shot to the lung...! ;)

Really good work, as always.

Pretty good assesment of Vincent.

That was good...

But what else would I expect from you ^_- Glad your and darknight's talk led to this piece...And yay for Sephiroth1Ripley8 cause I especially liked the bit about the the blood filling the pierced lung.

"Something warm and wet trickled from the corner of his mouth and on down his chin. His lung must have been punctured, he realized dimly."

Both you and darknightdestiny have a way of writing such great detail in things of that nature. Like in her "Flirting With Death" - those operations are just so awesomely done, no?

Anyway, keep crankin out these one-shots! And may the writing live on *cheers*

Jess 0:o)

My wound knowledge does sometimes scare me a bit, he hee. Pretty good but seems a bit...incomplete for some reason.