aww.. :)

Good job, and I think it makes perfect sense. (it runs in a pattern)

I don't know what it is about this particular vignette... but I absolutely love it. I suppose it's just how you put so much emotion into so few words...

I just have to say it was magnificent and that I am really glad I stumbled upon it. Great job.

Hey there! This got recced to me via Asuka, and I was wondering if you'd let me archive it! I'm trying to build an archive, and it's not even totally spiffy yet (ie, released to the public) but it's at

Thanks!

J

i don't know why i never reviewed. i think it's my favoritest of all my favorites in your fics. I especially like the "you miss them. you miss them. you miss them." the repetition makes it so much more powerful. (and ee, he said it three times X3) it's so pretty-poetic all over too. ;.;

anyway. Stupid Sasuke. Come back. We know you need them. T.T *sobs all over fic*

BTW, added it to my Team Seven C2 thinger. It really suck that I can't add anything R-rated, because there are so many fics of yours and other people I want to share. (and if you know of fics I didn't list, pleasepleaseplease pretty please tell me? ;_;)

Change of style... and it was flawless.

Okay... not much more than 100 words...

OOh... how very angsty. Vague, but still sweeps you up in a powerful current. Full of feeling, and just so... real. ; My vocab's running out as I review. Whoots.
But yes, this be good.
Fyredra

Very poetic! I loved it! _ love love love! lol -;;

Yes, Sasuke's "alter ego" talking some sense into himself XD I really enjoyed this. I'm guessing this was a one-shot? If it isn't, please do continue! I really liked this ) Good job!

So sad! Poor Sasuke. I liked your poem. Ja!

That was so greta... so emotional...

That's really nice, I like how it he was using "you" instead of "I." That really makes a difference.