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Ruzhena
2009-02-10 . chapter 1
Dear JK Ashavah!

Recently I have read your fanfic "The Secret of the Founder's Four", and I want to say that it is really great! Thank you very much for writing it! It's very absorbing.

Would you mind terribly, if I translate this fic into Russian language and publish it on Fanrus(/) and .ua (.ua/)? I will state everywhere that I am just a translator and you are the author of the fic. Also, all the additional information (like your email or website) can be published, if you wish.

Thank you once again for your wonderful work!

Ruzhena
ball.point.pen
2008-07-28 . chapter 16
i wonteg to tell you that Andromeda is the good cusin she got blasted off the family tree when she married a muggle and had tonks the chick remus latter on marry's. i beleave she got into ravenclaw but i'm not positve. um narcissa thats spelled wrong, and belltrix might be spelled wrong are her sisters who are in slytherin. cissy married lucius spelled wrong and had draco and bella had married someone that starts with an R and the last name starts with L. and sirius has a younger brother regulus sp i think hes three years younger. there mother is an all time ** and the black famile is from a long line of voldemort suporters. and for a fun fact sirius anishols spell out sob sirus orion black S.O.B. hehe i liked it. ow and i still can't figure out who the hawk is and i found it weird that you have lily as a main charter and yet shes not. i like your plot hate your fic you have to many things scattered your probly confusing people on the slitst bit i'm sorry that i'm a horrible speller. good luck with the fic. you do have tallent you just need to look at the over all veiw. and i say nothing that i have written in snobis bitchyness i'm just saying what i thing and truley hope you enjoy and feel pround of what you wright. because in the end it doesn't matter what anyone but yourelf thinks. and i'm not wrighting this because i'm saying that you don't because i'm not i'm just sayimg that i hope you don't take affence of what i've typed to you. tata
Leela74
2006-05-23 . chapter 16
Hi,
I gave up waiting for you to update this but luckily I had put you on my author alert list and got an email to say you had added a chapter! I was so pleased.

So the mystetry deepens. I am enjoying this story immensly. I really do not know what to say because this is just such a fantastic piece of work, even if it is no longer part of canon, it still is intriguing. Even if you do not get any more reviews, will you still keep writing this story? I hope you do, as this is brilliant. I really am enjoying the characters, so different but they feel right. Fantastic.

Update soon!
Savage Shade
2005-07-06 . chapter 15
Good story so far, i can't wait to read the rest of it. Keep up the good work.
sirius-and-james-are-mine
2005-01-21 . chapter 15
Hey, I think this is a great story as well, but you do have many facts wrong! Sirius hates his family and Andromeda is the only one he actually likes, she's not mean to him or anything... but great story, update soon!
sirius-and-james-are-mine
sirius-and-james-are-mine
2005-01-16 . chapter 12
Amazing story!! I've only read to Chapter 12 so far and I absolutely love it. The only thing I would suggest is to have James and Lily in a relationship...or is that going to happen soon? well I'll read the other Chapters asap! great job!
sirius-and-james-are-mine
AndiBlack
2004-12-07 . chapter 15
Disappeared have we? Are we going to reappear? lol I hope so, I really do like this story, and hope you write more.

- Andi
Xan
2004-09-20 . chapter 15
Wow. I remember reading this fic like ... years ago. Literally. It's great to see that it's still running (sort of); this was one of my favourites for a long time.

It's also cool to see the prophecy finally unfolded (even though I figured it out when I read it last :p). Now all they gotta do is figure out who the helpers are - the wolf is obvious enough, but the hawk? Hm.

I hope you update soon! Fool's hope, maybe, but there it is. ;)
ellie
2004-08-29 . chapter 1
er... there are a whole load of facts wrong in this! sirius' family are involved in the dark side, and he hated his mother!!
Analensey
2004-07-22 . chapter 15
*Adds story and author to favorites*
I just found this story, and I read it all through at once because it was just so good! I love it. Straight onto my favorites list. I would've reviewed all the chapters one by one...but that would've taken too long and I'm not exactly known for my attention span. So yeah. Anyway, as I said, I love this story. Lots. More than lots. Like lots and lots.
Sorry for making no sense, I have just consumed a 1.5 liter bottle of coke, and I'm just a wee bit sugar high. Anyway, I eagerly await the next part of this story, and in the meantime I shall go on and read more of your stories. And of course review!
Squashes
2004-07-08 . chapter 1
Great detail!
Whimsical Firefly
2004-06-16 . chapter 15
Hope you update soon - it's not fair that you always leave it on a cliffhanger. Anyways, I'm Aussie too so i know there's some holidays coming up where you can hopefully scribble a few chapters down :) Isn't that reasurring?
Questions: How come snape dosen't feature so much? You've made it Jorman vs. the marauders, yet in the books (when she mentions them) james and Sirius used to pick on Snape more than anyone else. Ah well, it's original. Also, how come James isn't seeker? Or will he get promoted later on (in a few years time).
It's a really great fic, and you should seriously continue writing it... don't make me beg here! It's going on my favourites list :) hope to hear from you soon
BBOO
2004-06-14 . chapter 15
I thought you had abandoned the story.. I had no hope left lol ahh you don't know how glad I am that i was wrong.. hope it doesnt take another year and a half to get the next chap out... please~!
eau lis
2004-01-19 . chapter 14
what's next?? dont leave us hanging... write more. then read my fanfiction. i too suffer writers block...
Raine
2003-11-16 . chapter 7
I wish that you would update this story. It's really good. It's a real shame that you have stopped it. I, for one, would be very interested in what's going to happen. Wouldn't you please continue?

~Raine
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