Well, totally awesome and I want more. Please?

-Alice

great start
how about a sparry fic (harry & Spike) couple
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so sexy lol ;)
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I think this is a really great start and from the comments I read from your previous posting of the story, it sounds like you've really made some improvements. There's still some things that could make the story better. For one, you really should get a beta reader. You still have some fairly obvious grammatical mistakes that could easily and quickly be fixed. They really mess with the flow of the writing. In other words, it's terribly distracting. Number two, Buffy's accent. If you want Buffy to be British, make her british. The idea that she could just change her accent is INCREDIBLY far fetched. My dad has lived in america for 20+ years and still has the accent of his mother country, England. Why does her past have to be a secret? Couldn't her friends know she was raised in England until she was 13? I think that would be much more realistic than hiding this huge part of her life from them. Also, how does her mom fit into this? I'm also unclear on her relationship with the professors. She seems to be close to them, but also pretty willing to abide by everything her father wants (i.e. the betrothal). And you keep on saying that's she's "not nasty" (a phrase I have never heard anybody use in the books), but we haven't seen that at all. So she had a nice conversation with Hermione. It lasted all of five minutes and Hermione is much harsher on most people. Finally, although I like the idea of her relationship with Draco, some of the things he's said are gag worthy and I'd really like to like him as a character. I mean, c'mon. Would Draco ever say "baby?" in the fifth year? Seems highly unlikely. Again though, the concept is great.

Hm. Sounds like Angel will be showing up in England fairly soon--he knows about Hogwarts & is magical etc... who knows, he could pretend to be Angelus & join with V's group or something...
DADA should be interesting, with Dolores as teacher...

I love Buffy/Draco pairings. The story has a good plot line, but needs a bit of work. I'd really like to read more! I hope you haven't abandoned this fic.

I sincerely hope you will pick this story back up. I'm very interested to see where you will take it. :)

Oh Buffy/Draco Betrothal (I didn't spell that right did I) I love it. I can't wait for the next update!

p.s. Just to save you from flames, you wanna change the way you use 'are'. "They are Mrs. McGonagall favorites."

you use it the right way in that sentence but the wrong way in "I think that we should get classes of are own."

It should be: "I think that we should get classes of our own."

But anyway, Update, update, update! I wan't to see MORE Buffy/Draco! lol.

ohh updateupdateupdate great story keep up the great work

i love your story so far. i hope that buffy doenst go evil though and that draco isnt either. i just love their characters to much. update soon please.
-Amber

Hey, I really like your story. Buffy Draco pairings are my favorite. Please don't abandon this story, because you haven't updated in a really long time so it looks like you are. Please, please, please update soon! Thank you! :)

You should start writing this story again, it is great!

well i can only wait and wish...

awesome chapter! is this fic put on hol dor unfinished? I hope not its really good! Keep up the great work and good luck writing!

Hey great fic. Will B be evil?
Love yaz
Liza

Well, this story is really good, and while I can't help with the classes thing I can tell you Gryffindor is spelt with 2 f's not one, but that's about all I can help you with :)well... great story update soon :)

I think this is a great story. Doing great Job!

Update soon! Plez